I just found this fandom and pairing, I absolutely loved this and really thank you for sharing. Hope you are staying safe during these times. Hope there is more Freezeburn in the future!

I was looking for old Freezerburn fics and found this great one, loved the interactions between our protagonists and possessive Weiss is the best! Thx for writing this.

It was very interesting reading about how this story came to be and all of the explanations to everything. And how this story evolved with time, letting the characters decide what to do.
I also think it’s interesting that you had different versions of Velvet, reading about it was nice, seeing all the work you put into just one character.
Also.. that ending was adorable. I loved it! I LOVE FLUFF

YEEES
The entire chapter I was internally screaming ‘THE ROSETHE ROSE’
And behold, my suspicions were correct.
I LOVE YOU VELVET

I’m not crying...

A nice chapter, the conversation with Blake and Adam was great.
Although
...
I understand faking your death... but why would She leave Weiss?

PRAISE THE LORD! SHE IS DEAD!
She died a pathetic death! For everyone to see!
This was marvelous!

Ps. I love the part where Weiss “saw” Ruby. It felt like a message, it is all over now, and that Ruby is happy Yang found happiness.

All the feels from this chapter aside.
I can’t help but feel like that last sentence of this chapter was you giving Rooster Teeth a punch in the face.

Yang! Nooo!

Hmmm, was that beatdown brutal enough? ... maybe .., maybe.

I sear if she survives...,...

Aaahhh,
I know she is a very important character for the canon story to move on and that she’s the same in many fics.
But so help me I cannot express how much I hate that psychopath.
She’s like, all characters that I hate in all games, movies, etc... combined!

...of all things. You just had to have the bitch ruin their sad moment together
Other than that. I’m getting really curious to why and how Weiss is experiencing all of Yang’s memories.

THE FEEEEEEELS

The beginning of the chapter... whyyyyy do you do this to me? The feels! The feels!

Also, great reveal in this chapter. This was the perfect way for Weiss to find out about Yang.

Fuq.
I normally find fight scenes very boring to read... but I really wanted to find out exactly how Yang would brutally murder them.