This is not a review but- oh lord

Good fluffy as f*ck story. Minimal errors and was a good read. Shame it won't be updated. I was looking forward to the dinner with Weiss and her mother and the others. Oh well.

New reader here but I’m just going to say this. Best chapter yet! I love how you went with a different approach to miss schnee, granted we knew nothing of her but everyone else’s interpretation was a woman who is very submissive, never there, or just like Jacque. Yours however is smart, witty, and downright comical and I love everything about her

I was so looking forward to that proposal...

ok so ike. how tall is velvet?

well the breast thing is way off. but the rest is pretty accurate.

OH MY GOD WILLOW YOU BEAUTIFUL BITCH! I love this. I love everything about it

All i can say is what the fuck is wrong with those 3? Forcing a confession through pain? No sane person would do that. You dont do that tp your friends because you think it's best. Its a asshole move no matter what.

I would love to see a fanart of that last scene: They're kissing and. . . Weiss falcon-punches Ruby.

hope you will pick this story up sometime in the futer. I really like it.

I like the Ninja Warrior reference

I really like your story, but low key feel like you don’t understand boxing. Boxing is a fighting sport that consists mainly of punches. A boxing stance is so much more than just that there are varying styles. Floyd Mayweather uses the Philadelphia Shell stance in orthodox. Kicks are absolutely not allowed is boxing. As much as I love your story, my dedication to boxing outweighs it.

Are you a feminist. It's just for some reason I get that type of tone from you story here?

Thanks,

Warryn.

While not the best I've read it's certainly one of the better you should be proud I was doing Coke at 14 you're doing much better

Mr Schnee reminds me of an even eviler, emotionless Ryan in this fic and it really disturbs me.