Reviews for Melting Vale
Read and stayed chapter 22 . 8/28/2019
god this story is just amazing, there's literally drama and probably angst in here but the dialogue of some characters are hilarious. "Always stand, you must stand to her right in all things, she's left handed, like me. It's important." I might just use that in some point of my life lmaooo I love this.
A fan chapter 10 . 7/1/2019
First off I would like to say this about the snowy vale fix that I loved and loved this. Ur portrayal of Weiss is to die for. Every fic I read softens her up too much. U show us that amazing bitchy side of her, no punches pulled, while also showing that heart of hers underneath it all. Then there’s ruby. She can be written as a bit of a Mary Sue sometimes, but in this fic u genuinely see how her social awkwardness and insecurities do set her at a disadvantage and I appreciate that kind of story writing. Keep up the good work
firecaster-hikaru chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
nice! can you also add this story in archive of our own? i saw that you added the rest of the vale series but you forgot to add melting vale.
SoleReclaimer chapter 23 . 6/7/2018
You know when you have that happy yet melancholy feeling you get from finishing reading a good story?

Yea, that's me right now.
thesonofabitchguy chapter 23 . 10/30/2016
Jesus ducking Christ this was great I loved it so much it's way too late for me to be awake and oh my god Blake got to be the new lord like her dad was and it makes a circle I'm so happy to have read it and I love the way it ended thank you so so so much for writing it I'm sad it's over I do believe a bumbleby sequel would be nice but omg this was so good
kaylakaze chapter 8 . 9/3/2016
You took great, strong characters and turned them into cowardly, sniveling wimps.
Guest chapter 23 . 8/8/2016
Excellent story. Extremely well written. While I am not particularly fond of your version of Yang, I adore what you've done with the rest of them.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/8/2016
Great chapter. That list at the end was brutal.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/8/2016
Great chapter.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/8/2016
Great chapter. Azura would truly make Zolo proud.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/8/2016
Great chapter. Really intense. I loved the exchange between Weiss and Azura. Wonder if their blossoming acceptance will survive this encounter.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/8/2016
Good chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/7/2016
Great chapter. Nice to see shades of grey in Azura, Blake and Weiss. Also thank you for have some positive put into the monochrome duo.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2016
An "Intolerable racist bitch"? Really? Well fuck you Blake.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2016
Great chapter.
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