Honestly, seems kinda forced.

Why do they not have there weapons with them? I get they on a date but seriously, with the amount of shit they get into they really should expect this kinda shit.

It's pretty clear that most White Fang don't have Aura active, so Ruby should have little to no trouble with them even without her weapon. Forced drama is forced.

This story is amazing. Probably one of the best stories I've ever read in my life. I almost shied away from the story when whiterose separated but i couldn't leave without the closure I was looking for. I'm glad I didn't because I would've have missed the best part of the story. While I wish this wasn't the end because I simply wish I could see more. And can't bring it upon myself to say this wasnt the best ending that could have been written for this story. I hope to see more with the coming seasons of RWBY

I love this story and all but you just saved your butt with this chapter. I didn't think that the break up was gonna hit as hard as it did with the time stamp. But rest assured I have a renewed energy to finish the story again.

I love this chapter, I never knew Monty personally and I only found out about his death a couple of years or months after it happened when volume 4 was being released. I love RWBY and have made one of my best friends through the show, and if Monty was here I would like to say thank you.

i love this u did very good keep up the good work cuz i love when yang and blake are alone cuz i rlly want them to date in the show and plus i just love rwby it self idk what i am saying omg

When I first saw this story I had just found out about fan fiction cause I was like "instead of thinking about things happening why not read about scenarios instead" and this was the first one I found. It was during summer break and when I first started reading I just couldn't stop reading. Everyday I would spend about 3 or 4 hours reading just this story because when I started it just finished. I managed to finish it in like 2 or 3 weeks and as for somebody who used to hate reading this was a shell shock for me and I loved absolutely every moment reading and it was the first time a story made me cry once. Now I can say I'm a pretty experienced fan fiction reader and I want to thank you for such a great story to start on. Funny side note when I asked my teachers how long 650,000 words were their eyes bugged out their heads it's so funny everytime.

Thank You

Weiss cmon you're soooo in denial ouo

I think one thing you do really well with this series is bringing in the action of Remnent every now and then, just to remind the audience of the world these characters are from. Plus it's well implimented with your plot-line.

I've always found these nice romantics soothing. I've been going through a rough patch in my life, but your work here has really helped me to work through it. Great work.

I've been reading this story since volume three ended. 2 years of my life has been spent on this story and I'm not sorry. Excellent ride throughout the years. I have cried and laughed with this story. Thank you for dedicating your time and energy into this. I look forward to seeing what other stories you put out and if you decide to stop, that's okay. Please, just do whatever makes you happy.

Do not be sad that it is over, be thankful for the time you experieced it while it happened.

Mate, it’s been one hell of a ride over the last few years. I’m saving this, favoriting it, and then I’m going back to re-read the entire thing. Thank you so much for this story, which I hope will be widely renowned throughout the RWBY community. Cheers.

When you get this on AO3, I'll be looking for it. that was one hell of a finale, and I don't regret reading any of it. hopefully, I'll be able to see more from you soon.

Thank you so very much for all the effort and hard work you've put into this fic. It's been truly a pleasure to follow and read. It's really not often that you see a story as awesome and as lengthy as this one, to be so continuent and to actually get completed.
I haven't followed this story since the start but for about one and a half years now, and boi, did I enjoy that ride. Probably really going to miss seeing you in my alerts.
Well who knows, this will most likely and hopefully so, not be the last fic we'll see from you.
So thanks again for writing and sharing this beautiful work, hope you're doing great.

Whoo! What a wonderful fic this was! Never really thought about seeing the end of this, but here it is. Such a hopeful and a happy ending.

Wonderful fic! Good work!

Bloody hell that was sweet. Such wonderful happy fluffy feelings! What a wonderful way to start my day.

Sweet chapter! Good work!