Beautifully written. Pure display of true love and affection. Thank you for sharing!

I'm currently going through your stories and I'd just like to say I'm immensely enjoying your writing- the characters are not just spot on in character, you also bring up interesting new concepts and ideas about them, bringing a really inspired new spin to characters we are already familiar with.

The idea that stood out to me most in this particular story was what you wrote in the last paragraph; that the Doctor so rarely allows himself to be a person, but occassionally he can trust people enough to let them help him. I really like this idea and think it suits him really well.

Awesome job!

That was beautiful. I loved all the metaphors you used.

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This was absolutely brillant :) you captured river and the doctor so well! Honestly, this is such a perfect, sweet piece! Thank you :)

Yesyesyesyesyesyes

Interesing concepts and descriptions, some of them quite fitting, others interesting ideas/aspcts to look at.

Good story.

Awwwwww, wow... what a wonderful moment... just, brilliant.