Reviews for A Place In The Sun
sassytigre chapter 20 . 5/19
Omg! The suspense is killlllling me! lol. Love it so far.
KookiePie1025 chapter 1 . 5/17
Oook! You write so well. The non-linearity of the timeline makes for a more interesting read! I love how stitch words like poetry especially with your introspective style of writing. I love how you write.

I know you’ve somehow lost the inspiration to continue this story but it’s such a shame because it’s moving so well into your plot. I can’t wait for the action and angst of the next chapter. I can’t wait for the breakup chapter. I can’t wait for the angst when you come back to the current timeline with Hinata fatally wounded and Naruto coming to terms with his mistake. I can’t wait. Please don’t abandon this!
imatwilightfan chapter 20 . 4/13
I think the plot is great. I love it really. Quite a few spelling mistakes and words misused (probably autocorrect?) but I can easily see past that. The flow of the story is all over the place but I get you are backtracking then setting it to the present soon after. I appreciate that Hinata is not the stuttering mess most authors make her out to be though it is part and parcel of her character. She has grown more sure of herself in this one and is not afraid to voice out her opinions especially telling Naruto that she doesn't love him unconditionally meaning she wants to be loved in return. Even telling him that if he can't do it then he has to be honest with her, which I guess is her biggest fear, and what probably happened. I am confused though if Sakura is a possible factor what with her being jealous when the couple started hitting it off unofficially. Hmm. Anyways, I have a hunch already with regards to their breakup, mostly it was clarified by Sasuke's chapter which planted the seed in Naruto's head and I guess whatever else happening in this mission pushed it forward. I don't mind the chapters of their comrades perceptions to their developing relationship, it is actually intriguing. I know you mentioned in one chapter that there aren't a lot of dialogues but I feel it isn't needed depending on what nuances and point of views it is you are presenting. You were doing a fine enough job so don't worry about it. I am curious when and how Naruto put the seal on Hinata. I also want to see their reunion after Hinata comes to in the present time or if it will be a tragic ending. I really hope this story will be updated. I was actually brought to this story because it was recommended or rather an inspiration for a story in A03. Pretty please give us an update. I really want to see how you wanted this story to go.
triforce jutsu chapter 5 . 3/25
"Solitude sometimes, had nothing to do with numbers and Naruto was slowly starting to understand that." This line is gold. Insightful. And too real, man. You got hella talent, my friend. A few grammar mistakes here and there, and a misspelling of "Jiraiya" in this chapter (you missed the extra "i"), but overall a good, solid story. The melancholy tone with romantic subtleties is refreshing to read.
triforce jutsu chapter 1 . 3/18
I really appreciate you making Hinata a jonin level ninja in this. It always frustrated me that pretty much all other konoha 11, aside from Sakura, Naruto (who becomes Hokage), Shikamaru, and Neji are the only ones who were officially promoted. The others, despite having their own ambitions for becoming great ninjas and having formidable skills, just got left to the sidelines (or were promoted, but never mentioned). I like this story a lot. You're very talented.
orange.leaf.hokage chapter 20 . 11/22/2019
Love this story
It’s non linearity is beautiful and the characters flawless
TheNeedToLeave chapter 20 . 10/9/2019
Hope you are doing well! And hope you can update! Such a beautiful story! I wasnt confused at all, I sooo want to know what happens and how and why they broke up!
TheNeedToLeave chapter 19 . 10/9/2019
No confusion at all! :) Very good writing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
Thank God you let this anti-trash die
Fishies2 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019
reading on!
Cmoore90 chapter 20 . 4/1/2019
Hi, i know it's been a million years and your probably doing something somewhere doing better things, but can you please update this beautiful story?
AngelicAlixx chapter 18 . 2/2/2019
I started reading this and I absolutely fell in love with this story. Once I got to this chapter, I realized that there is still so much to this story and it's not complete and you haven't updated in a very long time. Just know that this story is absolutely beautiful and I hope that one day you find the motivation to complete it.
TheMightyBoudica1995 chapter 6 . 10/9/2018
3 Beautiful
Guest chapter 15 . 7/31/2018
Honestly you’re really such a great writer! I swear I think it’s me but I just am so lost! I don’t know what happened but as a continued reading I got confused between flashbacks and what was happening currently! I think I’m going to put this story on hold, and maybe start again when I’m more... literate? (Is that the right word for what I’m trying to say? ). Anyway, overall very well written story and I hope to try reading this fan fiction later on!
Cmoore90 chapter 4 . 7/20/2018
Whyyyy did I do this to myself? Just started reading, and realized it’s not complete, but I can’t help myself it’s so good!
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