Reviews for Already Taken
HPandPJO4ever chapter 4 . 2/27
This is really good!
Selena92 chapter 4 . 1/11/2019
Awesome!

Poor Doctor. So glad that the Queen sort of honoured her promise not to harm him while waiting for River. (Though I wish the poor guy hadn't had to go through this at all in the first place) I really love how the Doctor wins his freedom back- which never should have been taken in the first place and how he and River even managed to make it into a lesson. Glad the Queen was receptive to it and changed her people's ways. Or at least begins to, doubt it's all completely over...

Very happy you had both Jack and Kate in there.
The Doctor ceowing over "one-upping" the Corsair had me grinning (so endearing) and wishing the Corsair had been there to feel the 'sting of defeat' XD

I love swords (Katana, to be specific), so I love the exact manner of their fight for freedom. And that sword dance at the end...hot.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24/2017
This was a delight! Thank you!
iWriterGirl chapter 4 . 2/1/2017
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Extremely well written and true to the characters. Awesome chosen cast and everyone at their finest!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/4/2016
Excellent story!
Heather Snow chapter 4 . 7/13/2016
Love seeing Jack and the Eleventh Doctor. River was fun too. It was an interesting story. And I did like the reveal about his children. I always like when companions learn some of those things the Doctor keeps hidden.
Addicted1 chapter 4 . 2/9/2016
I enjoyed this story start-to-finish. Thank you! I was chuckling at the humor, and the heavier moments helped to make the story feel real. I loved River's sass-and how TICKED she got at the entire situation-and I thoroughly enjoyed Captain Jack. Rory and Amy felt authentic, and I liked that Kate Stewart was there too. Thank you for this!
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
How many times have I told you how much I love the way you write Jack? Whatever, I'll say it again and again and again: You are the best Jack-writer I know. ;D
Hiiraeth chapter 4 . 7/10/2015
Ooh, I loved this story- at first I thought it'd be a fun, wacky adventure- but it was the emotional aspects that really got to me. Amy discovering the Doctor lost his kids (a part of his past that always gets me teary-eyed), Jack's reflections on how the Doctor has changed over the years, River's evolvement and the way her relationship with 11 is described... Everything seemed completely accurate and in character, and more importantly, it was really moving. Excellent job!
Whyhow chapter 2 . 4/8/2015
You set that line up to be as awkward as possible, didn't you. Well... You succeeded.
shiho59 chapter 4 . 3/22/2015
j'adore
Heather Snow chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
What a first chapter! Love the ending.
Thelizabeth chapter 4 . 10/27/2014
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! Gah. Just. Jack. asdfghjkl; FANGIRLING!
ThatAloneOne chapter 3 . 8/31/2014
Loved it. And you absolutely got Jack perfect. "Hey Kate-" NO. I could picture his face perfectly when he saw the Doctor and River. Very interesting story as well, would've made a fantastic episode!
betawho chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
"Wait, are they kissing? Wow, just wow."

LOL! Yeah, I bet that would be an eye opener to Jack.

"Wait a minute, how am I the odd one out here?"

LOLOLOLOLOL!

"He spun her out of his arms, readied his stance, and they began again."

LOL! Naturally. And fore-swordplay. You have no idea how much I like that image. Only them. Naturally they wouldn't do anything normal.

And you do a great job showing the heat between them, without getting explicit. Which is always wonderful. Just the image of him with his arm around her waist was excellent.

I've seen versions of "the Doctor gets accidentally married and has to be rescued" before, but I think this is my favorite version.

And little baby Meya I, with proud mama and daddy was an excellent coda.

And pouty Doctor that they had to coax into the water because he missed the beach three times. LOL!

I truly loved this story. Excellent characterization throughout, I could really see it all like an episode. It's almost 4 a.m. here, and I should be asleep. But this was much more fun.
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