Omg, this is so good! I can’t wait for more!

Ano...I really like this story even though it has been 4 almost 5 years could you at least put it as unfinished to not dissaponite any more readers and also this had good potential.

Good story. Time to imagine the rest of the plot and ending for myself in order to prevent going crazy.

Why did you stop updating? This fanfiction is awesome , and i just love the thought of , Naruto Haku and Hinata being the new Nakato yahiko and konan trio

Promising story with both of are heroes being jinchuuriki and being trained by Jiraya. Honestly the only minus of the story is probably it's name and that the children already think about themselves as vagabonds :-D But maybe it's just me who find it not fitting.
I would love to read more of it, especially if Haku and his mother joined our group :)

what the hell were is the next chapter?

Such a great story! I know it been like two years, but got back onto updating that would super cool! Please think about it! Thanks!

Great I loved the story it was dark at the beginning but you showed Naruto and Hinata innocence well.

One think I am worried about is Hinata seeing Naruto as a brother but I think you could make her feelings change to love but she does't really realize it until she is older about 8 or so when she starts thinking about it since she is more mature.

If you have Haku you can have Hinata see him as a brother to which eventually helps her realize she loves Naruto as more then a brother since she feels different about him then Haku.

Have Aisuhana become a mother figure to all of them and maybe have her help Hinata and Naruto with there feelings.

I can image how Naruto starts to react to Hinata as he learns about girls and gets older will be hilarious.

I really hope you have a lot more Naruto and Hinata moments they were just epic and realistic you showed how the characters and there relationships develop so well.

I hope that cloud will pay for what they tried to do to Hinata since he just reminds me of an evil dictator and is far worst then Pain or Obito ever was they wanted pace but the Raikage just wants power no matter the cost. There are some lines humans should not cross.

I hope you don't go all dark like you did in Anbu it was epic in its own right but like make Naruto almost give up but don't turn him to a complete emotionless Anbu though Hinata will bring him back. I don't see him giving up as long as Hinata stays by his side and can see him maturing more from it but not giving up because of it. Learn the world is not all innocence but still having hope and becoming more determined because of it.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I've read this story a few times and am to say I really like it. I don't know if you've abandoned it or it's on hiatus until you come back to it but it's really great! I enjoy reading the (very few) fanfictions that have Hinata as the Nibi Jinchūriki that makes sense. (Or, in some fics, a mate of the Kyūbi). I'll silently await the day this gets updated.

If by chance you'd let it [this story] up for adoption, I would like to take up that opportunity. Otherwise, beautiful work here. I'm going to add this to my favorites!

Hmm... This is interesting fic. I'm gonna follow, even though it's been a while since you updated...

By the way, "hyō" means ice(like Hyōton[Ice Release])and "ka" also means flower, so Haku's mothers name could be Hyōka.

This story is amazingly well done. I know it has been a long time, but I truly hope you plan to continue on with this

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This is pretty damn fascinating. I hope you continue working on it.

Yay! You saved Haku! I always like it when that happens. I hope all 3 of them will be good friends.

update soon please! good story