Reviews for A Warm Winter
Heavyarms150 chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
I dont think you need to worry about english being your native tongue. I know alot of native english speakers who spell alot worse. Great fic though!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/5/2019
"I have plenty saved for later. I have unlimited funds. You might be rich with money but I'm even richer with kisses."

Oh my tiny gay heart
I woke up in the hospital clutching my phone after reading that line it's perfect
What a perfect ruby-ism
Even after reading literally millions of words of white rose in the last couple of months binging that has to be one of the best Ruby lines I've read ever
RyuNoMe24 chapter 10 . 8/21/2017
I loved the two A/N where you said:
"Made it myself, it's not very pretty (I'm not good at drawing)"
"It turns out that I'm not really good at writing fluff"
That cover picture is so beautiful, so much more than I could ever do! Sure, there are a few spots that are weird, but it still looks amazing.
And, not good at writing fluff? Stop joking! This was about the fluffiest it could get. I could almost see the cotton candy in it. This whole thing was so good!
A short story about Ruby and mainly Weiss discovering their feelings for each other. No big war or fight or a giant story. Just the feelings. Less is more.
A perfect little whiterose story.
One of the best I've read!
Also I liked the role reversal of those two. With Ruby singing and Weiss getting into it only when Ruby shows it to her.
The only thing missing now is some bumblebee goodness resulting out of this story. You could totally make a sequel about those two. I'm sure it would be amazing. Think about it.
Stay awesome ;)
RyuNoMe24
Nagaichi chapter 10 . 8/15/2017
Truly awesome story!
theworstlivingcreature chapter 10 . 1/29/2017
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, THAT WAS SO GOOD
RaineyDais chapter 10 . 8/11/2016
Is it bad that when Weiss asked Yang "What are you on about?" I could only hear it in Gavin Free's voicr?
Misslieness chapter 10 . 3/27/2016
Lovely story. Thank you for writing it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
Interesting premise! Especially with Weiss being so distant from the rest of them. I'll let you know my thoughts once I've read everything, unless I feel the need to comment on a specific chapter.
Combatflaps chapter 10 . 3/17/2016
I absolutely love this story. Simple and elegant. You pushed Weiss with accepting her feelings. I felt her struggle and fear, but the story was still calm. No great melodramatic outbursts, but it still felt like triumph when Weiss and Ruby ended up together. And the fluffy fluff of their first kiss and holding hands warmed my heart. I'm rarely a fan of music mixed in with stories, but the way you kept it isolated to the singing lesson scenes made the music much less obtrusive and very appreciable. Thanks for the time you spent writing this. It made my day :)
Sarcataclysmal chapter 10 . 2/20/2016
Well. I'm going to be blunt and straightforward: best RWBY/WhiteRose fic I've ever read.
MoonlightsAppeal chapter 10 . 12/28/2015
Great Story I loved it :D , for some reason its kinda hard for me to find more RWBY fan fics like this, to bad it had to end at 10 chapters :/ (only one I've found so far is "What good is Love?") Any ways keep up the good work! :)
Tear of Light chapter 10 . 12/24/2015
This was a lovely read and a very cute ending. Thanks for writing this. :)
Adeline Wrights Fanfiction chapter 10 . 12/22/2015
Hurray! What a sweet ending. I'm glad I read it all the way through. Final impressions:

I feel like you did a great job with developing Weiss's character. The story began faithful to her snooty, proud, defiant personality and organically transformed her into a much warmer, accepting individual. I feel like you handled her inner conflict fantastically.

As for Ruby, her moroseness in the days/weeks before her confession seemed a bit out of character for her, but I'm sure you could have made more sense of it if you went into her head a bit. (Which, granted, you couldn't do given the perspective you chose for the story. Props to you on sticking with it.) Maybe I would've believed it a bit more if the transition from normal Ruby to depressed Ruby was a bit less sudden?

The tender, romantic moments at the end of the story were a tremendous relief after all of the inner turmoil Weiss experienced leading up to it. I wonder if maybe the setup dragged on a little too long or if maybe it just hit a bit too close to home and I wanted it to be over sooner. I'm sorry I don't have any particular feedback form spelling/grammar/phrasing/word choice but all in all I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Keep up the great work!

~Eyks
Adeline Wrights Fanfiction chapter 8 . 12/22/2015
This. This was the moment I'd been hoping for since I started reading, and it's made all the more powerful and beautiful because you spent so much time and effort building up to it. I love to read self-indulgent fluff, but it never has the same impact as when an intimimate moment occurs between two characters who have built up a relationship through a longer narrative. With two chapters left, I'm very eager to see how you wrap this up.
Adeline Wrights Fanfiction chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
I'm a very slow reader, so powering through your story has basically been my entire day so far. It's been a hard read—this kind of emotional anguish and insecurity is dredging up a lot of difficult memories for me. But that moment at the end of the chapter was so sweet, so warm, that I can't stop now. I've read this far already; even though it hurts, I'm going to push through and hope there is some catharsis at the end.

I haven't been reading the story too critically, but I do notice now and again that I read some lines differently than they were written to make things flow smoother in my head. You mentioned early on that English is not your first language, but honestly you write better than a significant number of native English speakers. There's room for improvement, sure, but I'm far too engrossed in the emotional tone of the story to be bothered by any technical errors.
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