omg omg TSUNADE WIT DEM SIDIS THO

OH MY GOD AN UPDATE wow! (Actually, I saw this a while ago but didn't review because I was like, I need to give a relatively good review and my computer is still too busy dying to allow this.)

That was incredibly foreboding. I love all of the tiny hints at "what happened later on" and so forth because it was all so ominous. And I loved it. It has a vaguely creepy feel, but not in a creepy way so much as in a sort of I-am-anxious-for-the-main-character sort of way. The way the entire reincarnation process was portrayed was interesting, too, because it felt more realistic than what usually ends up happening in stories like this. SI/OC type fics with a reborn quality usually take huge liberties with pretty much everything so it's really cool to see a sort of this-is-life-oh-god type of aura. I love that even with the entire process of reincarnation, she still seems to be able to acknowledge certain basic things that most people acknowledge; like, for instances, that strangers are touching her and she does not like that.

It's a cool writing style because it sounds like it's being told in present tense; it seems less like a regular past tense story and much more like, presently, the character is remembering and thinking on events that happened earlier, which is interesting to me because I've never seen a style like this before.

OOPS I TOTALLY THOUGHT TOBIRAMA WAS OROCHIMARU BEFORE I REALIZED HOW IMPOSSIBLE THAT WAS. I feel incredibly dumb, but equally interested, because there is a distinct lack of Tobirama in any fanfic ever and ooh I hope he'll be featured again.

It's crazy to me that there's Tsunade and then there's our character and is there even a difference? Takara must be horribly terrified with the entire situation and I feel horrible for her but a large part of me is concerned for our main character. I love it when an SI type fic goes off the usual railings and then has issues revolving around completely different things than the regular canon-type drama and this is IT.

I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner and I'm really glad you and Genna are going to keep going with this. Thanks for writing!

AH! I think I read the plagiarized story and thought, "This is vaguely familiar, is it a repost?" I feel awkward now for enjoying rereading it. . . Sorry about the plagiarist. I hope the mods rule in your favor.

love ths begginiing ! im sorry for what happen to you ! :/

awww... it's been too long since you updated and the first thing I read is that you will held this story just because of one person... it makes me sad as a reader but I understand if you don't want to continues it because of plagiarism. But I hope the moment the problem is solved I wish that you update this story regularly.

Hey,
Nice chapter , I really like this story.
Altough I'm kind of confused as too why you decided to punish your readers for
the idiocy of one person?
I mean I can understand that you're angry and hurt that somebody
had the nerve to plagiarize from you,
but don't you think it's a bit harsh to let your fans down like that?
Well, I just hope the matter gets solved soon.
See ya,
shiny

Love your story now following! . Please update soon!

This is really well written. I am stunned.

Then I glanced at the intro to Chapter 2. Really?! You haven't updated this story in over a year, and you suddenly decide to keep the story hostage?! Like wtf. That's like an instant turn off. Hurt all your other readers because you're grumpy at one person. Wow.

I'm extremely hesitant to read any more if this is the attitude you'll have. It's arrogant and thugish.

I won't blame you for not posting the rest of the story. I hate plagiarizers. Why post something if you don't get the credit? Though, if you do, I will be very pleased!

aaaahhhhh i hope that person changes their story :(
also i fangirled over tobirama and am dying so
i really really really hope that person changes their story so this one can continueeee
curious about tsunade's mother and why shes so unsettled by her and what happened during tsunades coma

next pelace :)

I'm sorry that someone had the gall to do that. But you found out about it and confronted them, so good for you. I hope they confess and delete it, but it seems like that won't be happening soon. Still love the story :)

...Well, if this problem is ever resolved, I'm glad to continue reading this story. In the case that it isn't, I am proud to have been a reader of such a well written and creative story.

Dang. That's just really messed up. I honestly hope that the person will just confess already. It's a little disappointing to know that you won't be able to continue with this story until the person admits it, but at least you gave us some content of the story to read for :) I hope that things work out-good luck!

I see, that's pretty disappointing to hear. I hope it works out :)