Great use of foreshadowing! Loved how you took a cliche and played on the expectations that caused to the point the character is making. It was a little obvious but it was also fresh and didnt feel cliche'd or forced.

Thank you for all of those 2 awesome stories. I loved them. I look forward to reading a third one, maybe he could be recruited in to the order of the Phoenix when Albus calls in his favor?

Apologies, can't log in from my phone. I don't know if you still read these reviews ever but I just wanted to tell you that this is my umpteenth time rereading this story and each has been as fun as the prior. I absolutely love how you write all the characters and created a bond between Ed Al and the students. I sincerely do hope that someday you find it in you to do that final chapter of the story because I'm burning with curiosity to see the alchemists and the main students see each other again after the promised day, especially if they haven't seen Alphonse yet.

Thank you sincerely for many excellent reads. This is the greatest crossover I've ever read. Keep up the good work!

Ultrawolfie out!

This series has been great but are you going to tie it all off neatly and finish it? it would be a shame to leave 1-2 chapters off

Good job!

Why is Edward so helpless. Like everyone just takes advantage of him and he's practically able to do nothing. This story is good but having such a weak version of Ed is really really aggrevating

Totally forgot this hasn't been updated since 2016. Well in any case if you are still active, this was a great story! love that the kids got to fight, and I'd love to see an epilouge some year of the reunion of maybe/maybe not wizard edward

Oh man tho shoutout to McGonagall in the heat of battle! ("Lite the bastards on fire, we arent trying to be gentle!" So good) Wonder if her and Heinkel would hit it off, not necessarily cause of the cat thing, but because theyre both stuck babysitting troublemakers lol (students, vs edgreedling)

I finished this series in a week! I love how you made magic and alchemy equally ! SLYTHERINS yes! I have read stories where the writers wrote them as pure 'evil' or completely kept some aspects of the original chracters! I really loved the characters in here, hope to see more of your stories soon.

Please Continue this story I would much like to read the conclusion.

heckin Heck this is so good. Please keep going

Crookshanks, you clever cat!

I don’t think Truth will take too kindly to someone trying to steal a peek at his Gate without paying the toll...

Rita is in for it now...

Keep a clear head, Ed. Because Fake!Moody just slipped up with his cover while he was insulting your abilities.

I have been reading this series for the past 4 days and it has been entertaining the entire time. But Mcgonagall straight up socking a guy in the face was the best thing I have ever seen. Thank you for this golden moment.