I wish you luck with this story but it doesn't seem like it's for me.

I love time-travel fics, Revan is my favourite character and you're running through my favourite SW storyline yet I can't get into this. Your writing style is very bare-bones and has very little descriptions/prose which is perfectly fine when you're writing an original story. The issue is that 9 chapters in and it's almost entirely KOTOR 1 script just with basic Anakin scenes thrown in. And we're still on the Anakin who is arrogant, bullish and doesn't really want to do anything yet is annoying things don't go his way.

Again, this isn't terrible. But keeping so close to the original story (even if you've included Luke and Anakin) means that there needs to be something else to keep the readers' interest. An in-depth look into the characters' mindset/personalities or a focus on their growing relationships rather than the plot. Something that makes it not a basic checklist of the game.

The short chapters and minimal writing story is fine for stories which immediately change the canon as this lets the reader go along for the ride and every new chapter brings brand new events. But it doesn't work when following a script most people who read this will be familiar with.

But as I said at the start, I wish this story well.

Well writ ready for the final chapters

Isn't Revan's holocron supposed to be in the Temple of the Ancients? I mean, that's where Darth Bane found it. How did it get to Korriban?

One thing I found interesting was Bastila's newfound perspective on attachements thanks to Anakin. Wonder if it will help her to stay in the light, unlike canon where she succumbed to the torture.

Yeah, I imagined that something would happen with Luke and/or Anaki given your note at the beginning of the chapter. An evil cliffhanger indeed.

Cool chapter as usual. And don't worry about not updating as fast as you'd want. We all have lives outside of the internet.

It's not a adventure unless a Skywalker gets badly hurt and yes he needs more Lightsaber practice.

Anakin is going to find it hard to resist falling to the dark side if he be lives Luke is dead.

Great chapter

Pretty sure at this point in time that the Jedi could have families though growing less acceptable or commonplace. . Don't quote me on that though.

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for another great chapter

As always a great chapter.

I am glad Luke has learned to shield himself in the force, assuming he good at it.

I hope Luke did not wast those three days and took time to meditate and release his emotions in the force. If he has a chance to being Anakin, assuming Malek is successful, then he needs to be centered and level headed being to emotional at the confrontation could backfire on him.

So cool that this story got a new chapter just after I finished ctaching up. Perfect timing!

So, the group is still going to Korriban despite not needing the final Star Map. Guess that Revan's memories will be about Vitiate and the Sith Empire he's building in the Unknown Regions.

Also, HK-47 must be happy, given that he had been kept at the Ebon Hawk for almost the whole story.

Regarding the Clone Wars, that last chapter is a gut punch in the sense of how utterly worthless the Clone Wars (as in, the actual war, not the series) were as a whole, since nothing mattered in the end, and it was just a plot from Palpatine to gain power.

And here I thought that revenge of the fifth would be better...

Glad to see you have returned. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter keep up the good work

By far one of the best SWs fics out there, also would you please consider adding obiwan, or metri to the a/n?

Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D