Reviews for My Place In The Sun
Theblueswordsman chapter 18 . 10/25/2017
What in the world?! Your Naruto is super weak. In canon in the war he created thousands of shadow clones strong enough to fight the 3rd raikage one of the strongest beings in the universe. That's canon...why are any of them worried, if Naruto is there he can create thousands of clones in sage mode, or Kcm or Kcm 6 path sage mode and no one in the world besides Sasuke could even try to mess with him...Naruto is the strongest being alive, he wouldn't even need clones to decimate the entire force here, he cld do it alone with extremely low difficulty.
Theblueswordsman chapter 17 . 10/25/2017
So multiple problems I see, is Tsunade dead? Cuz I don't think she is dead in cannon at this point...why couldn't they have just asked her in the first place?
Second problem is Sasuke can teleport, why didn't he teleports to the land of waves?
Third problem Naruto has evil intent sensory essentially, shouldn't he be able to sense exactly where Hinata is being held? He was able to sense where to go and who was evil in the war.. why didn't he just sensory up where Hinata was?
It doesn't make sense to me but otherwise great story very intereating concept. I want to see Naruto vs Hinata fight
Hinachi musalynn chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
Oh no, what had happened to hinata and Sakura and Ino?
Hinachi musalynn chapter 2 . 12/13/2014
Hm, I hope Sakura and naruto resolves theirs issues soon because how is hinata and naruto gonna be together if they don't.

And I am also glad that you didn't make Sakura the enemy here and instead made her hinata's friend. The one that's actually supporting her while going through this.
Hinachi musalynn chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Oh man poor hinata. Naruto better figure out his feelings because I don't want hinata to suffer. I don't believe him, that idiot. I like this story so far. I can't wait to see how naruto and hinata are going to get together. Good first chapter.
pervyysage chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
chap 1, so good i have to read all of it. Nice
10/10
Zombie Darkrai of Darkness chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
Is this supposed to take place after the show?
Guest chapter 26 . 7/6/2014
If Naruto is Hokage, how did he not know of their arrest?
Blank1993 chapter 26 . 7/6/2014
Aww cute
Dragon0905 chapter 26 . 7/5/2014
The end...or is it? Lol.
Ayrmed chapter 26 . 7/5/2014
A fitting end to an excellent story.
Blank1993 chapter 25 . 7/5/2014
Naruhina!
Bumbleburn chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I have just finished the first chapter and i love it already! Go hina shipping
Ayrmed chapter 25 . 7/5/2014
I feel really bad for Rizu and especially Chiaka but somehow I think they're happier than they were before. Good chapter.
Dragon0905 chapter 25 . 7/5/2014
Cute.
See ya next time.
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