50% fluff, 50% cute, 100% wholesome. Loved this story

Gotta be honest here, but how exactly does her father think she wouldn't last a day if she has credit cards that probably either have no limit or an extremely high limit? Unless she is wrong and he actually did cancel her cards.

Probably not the best time to come out eh.

Well, your not wrong in that it is kinda convenient that the entirety of Team RWBY is usually gay in fanfic. Even more so when they pair up with each other.

As a heads up you have a mistake in the second sentence, wrong mourning. Usually I'll ignore those because not everyone can have a beta to catch those things but its in the actual second sentence so you may want to fix it. I'm going to give this a full chapter to check if I like it but usually that kind of thing makes me drop a fic.

It’s cute, and decently written, but my god man, the level of errors is worse than just ‘a few mistakes’ it’s more like an average of at least one misspelled word or grammar error per sentence! Fire your beta reader, because they’re clearly not doing their job. I’d be willing to mark it up if you sent it to me in a PM, but brace yourself for A LOT of red text.

Thank you for posting this! I really enjoyed the story, and it's ending!
Keep writing!

Lol, I didn't even think about the ages, but thank you for the clarification!

My whiterose senses are tingling, they say I approve of this masterpiece

No matter how many times I read this story it always gets me. All the fluff, angst, and drama but mostly how well you talk about the love Ruby and Weiss share. Extremely well done. Thank you for an amazing story!

I lost my mom three years ago, it was august 18th 2013, and I was almost 13, I remember that day as the worst day of my life, so I know how it feels. Though I wasn't really numb so much as I was angry, and horribly heart broken, though I have heard of people acting in a "numb" sort of way. In fact, some of people that I've known had this very blank, almost vacant look about them, it was eerie, and kind of cold, but not like "Weiss" cold (pun intended [duh XD]), it was more heartbroken, ya know? Oh also, If you ever need anyone to talk to, then don't be afraid to ask, I like helping people, and you seem like an awesome person based on your authors notes ). Also my names Hunter (and i'm a girl [people often think I'm a boy because of my middle name, and I just tell people outright when I'm online, otherwise people have no problems coming to the conclusion that I'm a girl]) Okay, I'm going to stop rambling, It always annoys the hedge out of people XD. also, awesome story, its so well written and engaging )

Extremely well written. You really know how to show how the characters are feeling and have very interesting ways of describing how they act. You have a talent that few others possess. I'm impressed and you should feel great about your writing abilities. Congratulations.

Extremely great story. The amount of detail that is put into describing feelings and situations is really something to be proud of.

You should right a full on sex scene

This is pretty great.