Reviews for Captivity |
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AngelicVolleyball chapter 1 . 4/8 Please update! |
Dan phantom chapter 16 . 4/29/2019 i which you would right more |
MamaIsDead chapter 16 . 3/8/2019 Honestly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and undoubtedly the best Mermaid AU Fanfiction I've ever read. This story is a lot different from others for obvious reasons. Just read the story and you'll see why people love it so much! :) If I hadn't known this was a fan-work or written with characters from an existing series, I would've assumed this was copied and pasted from a published novel. Which reminds me: I think this work has the potential of becoming its own story if some of the characters and names were tweaked a bit. It's just so unique and well-done, that it doesn't seem like a fanfiction at all. It's like it was taken right out of a published novel. I'm trying not to exaggerate, but I really like this story and think it's underrated. I would love to see this as an original book or a web-comic. That. Would. Be. So. Awesome. Sorry for ranting a little, I'm a sucker for mermaids, especially when they have realistic depictions of them. Anyways, this is a great story and I will wait for more. Hopefully, the author will start feeling better soon and jump back onto this glorious story. But in the meanwhile, his/her fans will loyally wait until another update C: |
Spiralled Fury chapter 16 . 1/13/2019 This is great! Can’t wait to see more! |
nervousEnsemble chapter 16 . 11/13/2018 i know that stories left hanging for a while are left for a reason (i have a few of my own, not posted tho) but I found this and am in love? Its honestly one of my favorite mer fics to date and I'd love to find out what happens with it! |
somebody chapter 16 . 10/21/2018 update plzzz |
Exeviclove chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 omg please update it! This is so amazing! ;w; |
Jewel moonstone chapter 16 . 9/3/2018 I miss this. Are you okay? |
xTorchbearerx chapter 16 . 8/8/2018 I love your story! You've nailed the characters' personalities and the plot flows well. I'd love to read more and it would make my day if you continued :) ~ xTorchbearerx |
eeveemaster chapter 16 . 7/21/2018 ...im horrified and exited at the same time. im hoping u will update soon tho |
Devious Purrloin chapter 16 . 5/13/2018 Wow...I really hate Vlad. I hope they at least utterly ruin him. And maybe punch him in the face. Dalv spelled backwards... Oh. I didn't realize that before. Yeah, that's so like him to do that. |
Paper jam chapter 16 . 5/8/2018 Where is Chapter 17? |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/1/2018 Can u pls update |
Cool chapter 16 . 3/7/2018 Amazing story! I found it from seeing art you made on devianart. I really hope you will continue! |
LuanaAlbuquerque chapter 16 . 3/3/2018 Hi my name and Luana and I'm from Brazil I'm fascinated by your historia having to translate to my language little by little then I beg you to continue with the story please please please |