Reviews for A Pilot from Roanapur |
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Curse Of Kings chapter 1 . 6/3 Does Yukio appear in this story? |
OmegaUltima chapter 36 . 8/9/2019 Okay, this is a good story, but there are a couple (probably personal) problems with it; for one, other than the still missing Tabris, there should have been at LEAST one other Angel, that blue double-helix one that Rei Self-Destructed in canon (no idea about what is in the remakes, though), but even ignoring that one outright, Tabris is still a HUGE loose plot thread And then there's the fact that the sorta-growing possible relationships between Shinji, Misato, and/or Sawyer were just completely dropped and never mentioned again once Mari showed up; hell, we never even see Sawyer come back for her teaching job, or even so much as meet Mari, and I don't think that she'd drop what she felt without a fight, even if Shinji was happy with Mari But that's enough whining and such from me; I'm gonna go have a look through your other stories to see if there's anything else of interest to read, now~ |
Kurama00 chapter 21 . 1/4/2019 I really hope this ends up a harem. Sawyer would work well with him. |
LordMentat chapter 36 . 9/9/2018 Amazing story! |
rjcelona chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 Just found this and I can’t wait. Eva and Black Lagoon! I just hope that you have Revy take care of Gendo later on. I will enjoy this. |
FourMurasame chapter 36 . 5/17/2017 WOOO, that was bada$$, thanks for writing this crossover of 2 of my favorite series! Couldn't have imagined it any other way. Well done. |
Guest chapter 18 . 11/25/2016 oh, dis gonna be good! *grabs popcorn* |
Guest chapter 17 . 8/21/2016 Screw the haters man I like your story best read I've had in a while |
Alex2909 chapter 36 . 7/15/2016 awesome story |
Galeiam chapter 10 . 7/4/2016 While this is honestly a pretty interesting story. The Formatting of the dialogue pretty much kills it. |
Galeiam chapter 3 . 6/29/2016 While a good story I sincerely hope you clean up the formatting at some point. |
12954086 chapter 18 . 6/29/2016 Great crossover idea, completely unexpected but works well. Wish it could get some formatting love as well as expanding the early chapters. Pacing feels a bit rushed and lots of important world building and minutiae feels missing or glossed over. Yes, we know what the characters are like from before, but it's nice to see how the see each other and such. It's a great concept and I really hope to see it improved. I can easily see the effort and love the author put in and I want this to shine like I know it can. |
Guest chapter 36 . 6/11/2016 You need to place the complete tag on this story... |
TNhector chapter 36 . 6/12/2016 Loved it through and through keep up the good work |
ErmagehrdBastehrd chapter 36 . 6/11/2016 A nice ending to the best Evangelion crossover of the year so far. What I heavily appreciate is your originality and the way you have written the characters of the Black Lagoon cast to fit into the Evangelion universe. The Yui/Misato pairing at the end was unexpected but not a bad thing. Another great thing is how you have done the ending which gives this fic a satisfying conclusion. While there were some grammatical and spelling here and there it didn't disturb the reading experience. On conclusion I found great enjoyment reading this fic and I am looking forward to your next fic. |