Reviews for The Raven and the Fox
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
I see all these comments about hinata almost slapping naruto and her thinking it was fair that Sakura hit him often... but think about it, the way he phrased what he wanted to do sounded very sexual... and if he did that to all of him fangirls I mean... anyone would be pissed right? Plus it really does fit this oc hinata! In my opinion, I think that it was a fair thing for hinata to say! Btw great one shot! I reread it like 5 times!
That pansy chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
I just can't have enough of it... It's like every month I visit this story... So beautiful, so lovely..
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
This is very sweet. Nice one-shot.
kenzie.parish chapter 1 . 6/16/2017
I cry. This is too cute!
kdaniel chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
Very good story especially the devious hinata nice change of pace after all she had been through
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
Ella-Vi chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
great one-shot
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Love it! Great one- shot from begging to end
ironblastharmony chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Love this one shot :)
NarHina chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
I am liked but a bit mad at Hinata for being angry at Hinata and saying that he deserved to be hit by Sakura all those time and immediately assumed the worst when he asked to be with her alone.

She just saw him as a bad guy and almost threw him away after everything that happen, she knows who Naruto is and she acted like she was interested him if he did mean it that way you can't blame him when someone is actually wanting to be with him after all he's been through.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
AmethystQtpie chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
loveeeeeeeee iiiiitt! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Awesome and beautiful
ZirconK chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Aww...one awesome one shot. You rock it!
Love it so much. I love how he act along after finding truth. Raven and Fox awesome!
Narutothedevil.dnd chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
Aww so fluffy and mushi. Keep up the good work.
SalDalia chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
That was such a cute story. At one point I too wished that Hinata would use a not so Gentle Fist on Naruto before the revelation.
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