Reviews for You Make Me Feel
ShadowStudent67 chapter 13 . 6/27
This will forever be one of my favorite ItaSaku fics hihi I just love how you portray the characters, the gentleness they have for one another and all!
WriterHime chapter 13 . 4/19
I LOVED this Fic! Such Ita/Saku Goodness!
cherryblossomszahime chapter 13 . 2/5
Cute
young kagome chapter 13 . 2/1
Aw sweet.
ForeverDancingInShadows chapter 6 . 12/18/2019
The story is okay, but the writing is cringe-worthy. Exposition, exposition, expo-freaking-sition. It reads as if the characters are aware there is a reader and they are explaining every. Single. Detail to them through their thoughts. Sakura being distracted in the middle of a fight to watch Neji and explain that he has a reason for everything he does is absurd. She then precedes to think, "see? He had a reason for everything." Also the ridiculous sprinkling of Japanese words throughout is incredibly annoying. I really don't understand why authors feel the need to show off that they know a few words in Japanese by doing this. Not only does it throw off the flow of the story as it is something that obviously doesn't belong and now I need to go and look up what the word means if I care enough, but it can already be assumed that they are speaking Japanese and we are reading the equivalent in English.
Lorrayne Soares chapter 13 . 10/22/2019
lOVE IT! I'm looking foward to this kakasaku fanfic!
alygator.xandra chapter 8 . 9/3/2019
“Blood is thicker than water” is actually the shortened version of “The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb” meaning that the blood we shed together binds is closer than family
animefangurlcraz chapter 13 . 8/14/2019
omg what a sweet story, loved how big of a family they have!
animefangurlcraz chapter 3 . 8/14/2019
THIS EPISODE IS EPIC!
TheProdigy'sWife14 chapter 3 . 1/21/2019
Some tea was sipped, the rest was choked on, followed by a bunch of "OOOOOOHHHHHHH"s.
My wig was snached. Best chapter ever. Best story ever. Hands down
kazuyaryo chapter 13 . 1/12/2019
That was a fantastic story.
SunxDancer chapter 4 . 5/31/2018
Hi!

I'm really sorry about this, I wasn't going to do it, but it's been bothering me for hours: I was eating up your fic, and I thought the story was going brilliantly. Until this chapter.

Maybe it's just me, and everyone else thinks it's fine. Please don't take this as an attack, but I do believe it's important: I was revolted by Sakura's reaction to Itachi, and everyone else's standing around. I understand you wanter to portray how angry and hurt she was, I understand you wanted to show how Sakura's opinion of him was so important to Itachi that he'd let her hit ('take a beating' in Sasuke's own words) him just to prove that he was done hiding from their relationships.

Now, flip that over. Would you have had Kakashi stop Sasuke from intervening if it had been Itachi splitting Sakura's lip open out of anger?

Now, I LOVE dark stories. I understand it is fiction, and we as writers get the chance to build on our own feelings and experiences and put our characters through the wringer. However, I am concerned about the message this particular scene sends: that she was so hurt and so angry that she lashed out physically at him, and because Itachi loved her so much, he could take it. And that it was okay.

Hell, like I said, this is M rated for a reason, but please don't take an abusive relationship and call it love. At this point, it looks like Fugaku was right after all, and Itachi had no business dating Sakura at all.

Again, other than that, good job with your writing style and detail! I really did like it!
MJKS8Akira chapter 13 . 4/25/2018
For the love of God. I fucking love your writing so much. Please please never stop writing. It sounds crazy but I love every single one of your fics. You are amazing. Thank you so much for your work.
KuriKashi chapter 13 . 3/23/2018
I really love how you clearly showed Itachi's vulnerabilities. He is still a strong shinobi but still lacks some emotional and social development due to trauma. I also love how every character shines whenever they act in a chapter through their actions or their dialogue. Really one of the most natural and hilarious dialogues I've seen.
I also really like how you showed that not everyone needs to be paired and get married. That marriage is not for everyone and people can still be happy without it.

Well done and well written!
StillBlooming37 chapter 3 . 1/24/2018
OKAY SAKURA! GO THE FUCK OFF ON HIS ASS YESSSSSSS! I’m here for it!
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