Enter looking for the rude and hold 7 but this is shit, a naruto more emo than my fucking grandmother and then there is a very useless hinata. What a shit good this died.

Thoughts boring i came here for badass demon Naruto what I got was a angsty kid and a useless muncher Hinata like it felt like I was reading filler lol

This is epic.

I hope hinata doesnt cheat on naruto with kiba. Naruto would probably kill at the inuzuka.

I hope sakura stops being afraid of naruto

I hope sasuke accepts naruto after he learns the truth

Dude the'retwelve

I really hope you continue this story I really like it. And I'm secretly hoping Hinata eats Kiba's dog.

I love your story because is mainly canon with a brooding Naruto and a "RTN" Hinata.
Each and every chapter is interesting and the relationship between Naruto and Hinata is deep, funny and hot when it has to be.
I also love team 8 so is nice to see they're friends, and I'm not mad with Kiba for liking Hinata, I'm looking forward to the unjustified jealousy Naruto is bound to feel.
I'll be waiting for the next update!

Interesting back story

Well this is a first on this type of fic but so far it's been interesting.

Bull shit fanfic you got good imagination but plot confuses the reader

I will give this a shot sounds good

So he went after Gaara instead... I suppose he's probably the smarter choice. -.-' Love the chapter! XD

I still don't like Kiba, I wonder when Naruto's going to have his jealous moment. Also I think Naruto should bring a fox home, since they may be the only animal that won't hate him.

Though I think if Naruto does it without asking I think Hinata would still be mad at him, though if the fox reminds her a lot of Naruto it maybe ok.

I get shes made that Naruto is babying her, but come on he's had a hard live and is trying to keep the only person that loves him safe.

I can't wait until Naruto returns to Konoha it will be epic, especially when he meets Kiba.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Sorry for being an ass and not reviewing each chapter. I just couldn't stop reading your story. It is funny, romantic with a good amount of fluff especially with the clones and the plot is very entertaining. I love this version of Hinata and Narrow and can't wait the next chapter.

this fic is awesome.

Oh my god, they finally did it! You go girl! But what will happen now that he will go training, these two interaction is just so eandearing and fun, gotta miss it...