Rereading this and damn they should have kept the Bishop last name thing, Gives me TMNT 2003 vibes that Bishop was also messed up though at least that guy learned the error of his ways

i love stories like this cause lets be honest alot of the Transformers series do show how corrupt the system is and i use Animated TF as an example of how corrupt that damn council is as I mostly feel for the cons in Animated and Prime

that's right. this is the one that caused me pain

cue that one groundhog meme. dun dun DUUUUUUNNN!

Please continue this story! I love it!

Wait... so how did raf get to the Megatron from shockwave. Did Starscream grab a different human?

Noooooooooooooooooooooooo! NOT RAF!

Predacons rule!

Neither?

no! star!

AHHHHHHH! ITS MY TWINS!

Love your work. Your story and interpretation of characters are fantastic!

Could you do Orian Pax teaching Megatronus to read and write and/or Megatronus's escape from the pits? Also, could you do a scene of Megatron and Starscream coming to some sort of understanding or something? I know they weren't close at all, but it would be nice for there to be closure over the bad blood there.

OOOOHHHHHOOOOO! This is now one of my favorite Transformers Prime fanfictions! There is just so much to say about this story! So let's get started!

First off, Originality: While the story of Decepticons and Autobots teaming up to fight a greater evil is a common plot choice, having them go against the alliance of MECH and Shockwave is where this story is separated from the common tropes. Also, bringing other Autobots and Decepticons into the story were also great choices. And dare I say, killing off the loved, Ex-Wrecker Bulkhead was also a wise choice. It gave the readers a sense of the risks that the characters were taking to find their 'Happy Ending'. It showed the importance of the battle. Not many authors have the guts to do that, so congrats to you.

Secondly, Characters: You did a great job of keeping all the characters true to their personalities while at the same time giving them room to grow and develop. Using the change in their History, you gave well thought out redemption stories that explained the characters' drive for their goals. These small stories also explained any past, present, and future actions and choices that the characters have. But in the end, they stuck true to their nature. I can't for certain say the same for Blur, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, and Lockdown (as I don't know the characters themselves well) but based off of them from other stories, I'd say you wrote them just as nicely as the others.

Third of all, Relationships: I think that many readers will agree when I say that watching the bonds (both literally and figuratively) grow and flourish was spectacular. I am a sucker for Character/Relationship building/developing, so this element of the story was very intriguing and enjoyable for me. The relationships were unique yet understandable for their circumstances. I also really enjoyed the Father-Son relationship between Megatron and Bumblebee. And Bumblebee's name, 'Little Scout' was a really nice touch to represent the relationship between the two. You'd think it wouldn't work out because of their past, but you proved us wrong. I also enjoyed the small chemistry(?) between Arcee and Dreadwing. Whether it was romance or not, their relationship was one I was not expecting yet ended up liking.

Lastly, Story/Plot: This story is a chest full of surprises. This story has multiple smaller stories within it. This story is a masterpiece. In the beginning, readers would think that this narrative is solely about Bumblebee and his troubles with MECH, but then it is revealed that there is a greater evil at work. Turning from the original storyline of Transformers Prime, this story created not only a new Present and Future but a new past as well! Having the 'Slave Code' as a key factor in this story was very creative. It served as not only a powerful obstacle to the main characters but also a common reminder to them of their past and how far they've come since the beginning.

Whelp, that's everything! I'd say this was one of the best Transformers Prime (non-crossover) fan stories on this websites. I'm definitely gonna read the Outtake Stories, but I will miss this one. It was a terrific read. I hope you will continue future stories with the same if not better quality of writing. Bye for now!

(P.S. I would hug Miko, my Favorite is Soundwave, and, based off of this story, I'd side with the Decepticons. WOO!)

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FAN!~