| Reviews for RWBY, JNPR, & HAIL |
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   Monster King chapter 24 . 6/18 Awesomeness please continue |
| iamafish chapter 24 . 5/23 :) |
| ankitmahat chapter 1 . 5/4 The 'Sign over your company' cliche. In what world does this even works. If you capture Bill Gates and force him to sign a few papers, then does this mean that you'll become the owner of Microsoft? The story has just started and I already have a low opinion of the Author's IQ. |
| jeremiahkelley93 chapter 24 . 4/23 great chapter. |
| spitfyre1 chapter 24 . 4/10 This is an amazing story can't wait for more |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6 Absolutely fucking retarded |
| Otsutsuki Naruto chapter 20 . 4/3 Lost interest! Harry magic is still shit with that block and switching betwen Aura and Magic. Then we have dementors and suddenly they become some hybrid of them. Then stupid vote of redeeming Cardin, he should die somewhere in a ditch, being eated by Grimm and isn't worth any redeeming because people like him aren't worth the air |
| Matt chapter 24 . 4/2 Finally! Took you long enough. So neat that you included the Ace Ops. How do you feel about the newest ship that is Qrow/Clover? |
| Guest chapter 24 . 4/2 I got confused for a while when i saw Jacques instead of Damon. Kudos for updating it backwards |
| Vld chapter 24 . 4/4 Hey, don't sell yourself short! At least you're TRYING to fix what you think was a mistake! Which wasn't, since back then you didn't know Blake's parents were alive. As far as i'm concerned, if you manage to get it to work, then you'll have done a good job. |
| dogman999 chapter 24 . 4/3 Keep up the good work . Hope you update again soon. |
| Naelyon chapter 1 . 4/3 Yeah, I can't bring myself to continue reading this. While it started out good, it's starting to become more and more crack the further I looked ahead. You obnoxiously put song suggestions in the middle of your text, change perspectives way too much and use too many author's notes in the middle of your chapters. You have too many OC's and probably most importantly, a shitton of things have changed from canon and all of it happened completely offscreen with no explanation. Ruby probably wouldn't even be at beacon if her Summer didn't die because she'd have no reason to become strong that quickly. Yang wouldn't be as outgoing if she never had to deal with the death of Summer either. Blake also wouldn't be who she is if Adam wasn't an evil bastard, basically, you tossed out 90% of the reasons why the characters are who they are but you kept their personalities alnost exactly the same. |
| Reishin Amara chapter 24 . 4/2 Mind magic... save. |
| starboy454 chapter 24 . 4/2 excellent update |
| Anubis Cloudly chapter 24 . 4/2 Great to see this story updating again! |
