Honestly a perfect song for them leaving is in my opinion the song called Runaway by Love and Theft.

This is what I like about reading. Good plot advancement. I don't like it when plot advances too quickly. It takes away from the story. Conflict is important too. The argument between ruby and Weiss had me in tears.

Love this story so much ,great writing. Thank you for your work

First off, I want to say that your an excellent writer. You command of the plot and wide vernacular stand to keep even a fanfic such as this a quite captivating story. Well done. Secondly, I'd like to thank you for the bits of knowledge into psychology, and sexuality, that you placed into this chapter. Speaking personally, and quite honestly if I may add, I have struggled with my own sexuality for years. I had been able to describe the why of how I came to feel for people, the circumstances, but never the actual reason behind how I could come to care those people. I had considered myself straight for many years, but them I lived out in the American mid-west for a time, and truly began falling for another man I had met, but only after spending many months in his company. My point, is that I was believing I was bisexual, even though I knew I really didn't fit that bill. Demiromantic, or demisexual, is the word I had been describing for years, without ever knowing it was actually a thing. So, thank you. You gave me that one little bit of knowledge to put this internal struggle to rest.

Grimm disappear when killed so what bodies of Grimm are they supposed to be surrounded by?

Garbage, really her Aura would stop a damn bullet, why is she making it out to be a problem when it isn't? Shit like this is just fucking stupid.

Not bad, the only problem is thinking Ruby would get anywhere near to 6 foot tall. She be lucky to reach 5'5.

what an incredible story. amazing and perfect. ty for ur work.

I don't know if those references to Snuff by Slipknot were intentional but the lines fit way to well in Ruby's nightmare. I think this was a great way to cap off a great story.

This story was amazing ironically the dream at the end felt alot like the start of another story i read like parallels are uncanny from weiss leaving how ruby acted and not to metion the first part being told for some one else's perspective. All in all i really liked the storu as a whole from the characters to the conflict. I felt the story wasent to long and not to short. All in all i had a lot of fun reading this

amazing

Geeze that was well written for a sex scene. Like really well written, actually.

Down to the awkwardness of the first time in a healthy relationship between first timers, lol.

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Good shit
very good

The only difference between poetry and prose is rhythm, and even that is optional. Looking forward to reading the rest of your good work!

… Though it occurs to me that I *may* have read it before once, long ago. Ah well; I don't remember.

Oh, actual psychological disorders being applied -correctly- in fanfiction! Yay! _

Excellent descriptive language, by the way.