Reviews for In Sickness and in Health |
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Vadercat chapter 15 . 6/28 Great story. All I can advise is use grammar check and spelling check. Although to used a lot of words correctly in their meanings, you used the incorrect spelling of the words. I had to puzzle out the meanings of some sentences because of in correct word usage and improper punctuation. All this, of course, takes time and practice to learn, but you do have a very good command of creating a believable plot. |
DreamySalem chapter 15 . 6/16 Absolutely amazing |
aniklan8 chapter 8 . 6/2 I really didn't see that coming! I love it 3 |
wandamarie chapter 15 . 5/31 thanks |
wandamarie chapter 14 . 5/31 oh my |
wandamarie chapter 13 . 5/31 holly cow poo |
wandamarie chapter 12 . 5/31 thanks |
wandamarie chapter 11 . 5/31 wow |
wandamarie chapter 10 . 5/30 Good chapter thank you |
wandamarie chapter 9 . 5/30 getting good thank you |
wandamarie chapter 8 . 5/30 thanks |
wandamarie chapter 6 . 5/30 nice job |
wandamarie chapter 5 . 5/30 keep up the good work |
wandamarie chapter 4 . 5/30 wow |
wandamarie chapter 3 . 5/30 getting good thank you |