Oh i do like protective loving daddy Charming :)

great one shot loved it

I loved this bonding moment for Hook and David. I really do hope that the show somehow addresses what David and Charles said to each other back in the past. I'm hoping they do.

I just want to say...THANK YOU! I enjoy reading Captain Swan stories as much as the next fan but most of the stories have failed. Not only was this story well written, but you also stayed true to the characters of how they speak and who they are. Please write more of OUAT stories for us. We need more from you! Thanks!

This is really good!

Really love this! I like how that brief meeting with "Charles" ended up changing Charming's life and influencing their reimagined love story. Great job!

This is perfection! I hope the time traveling bonding that they did plays out or even gets touched on next season! I love Hook and Charming's relationship.

Bloody brilliant! The idea of Charming seeing True Love in Charles and Leia might have just become my favourite head canon. Amazing job! Loved how you portraited Charming, loved the ending. Thank you!

This was so good! Loved seeing things from David's perspective, and I really hope they revisit Killian and his conversation on the show. Everything about it was perfect, right down to their conversation at Granny's. You really nailed how reluctant Killian would be to accept his praise and David's quick change of topic to a job search was hysterical and just right.

loved this

Great story and very well written! I truly hope they address the conversation between Charming and Charles by the fire in season 4. I had never really thought about what Charming might be thinking now that he knows who those two really were in the past, but I do think he's the type of person who would spend time reflecting on those moments.

This was perfect. I loved seeing everything from David's perspective and the ending was awesome.

Read this on tumblr. SO GOOD. I NEED THIS TO HAPPEN ON THE SHOW!

Perfect!

Awwwwwww.
Right in the feels