might just be a typo, but mrs. is a for married woman, ms. is what ur looking for

I know that I'm extremely late, but I have to say, that was the most amazing, captivating stories I've ever read!

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I’m so sick of Yang only listening to Weiss’ side of the story when it comes to Cinder attacking her. If Weiss wasn’t such a bitch and so quick to judge toward Cinder, they wouldn’t have been in that mess in the first place. There’s two sides to every story.

A lot of this is just drama for the sake of drama, frustrating to read and hard to empathize with. Yang is a moron, and you have made her willfully obtuse just to force more angst into the story.

I’ll be calling it here

Original reader here. Still desperately hoping for more, and hopes your well.

I personally really liked the work, as it provided back stories that were believable, interesting, and unique. It showed the evolution of characters over large periods of time. You should hold on to that!

Don't delete it. It was a journey that could be revisited at some point, and if there are parts you don't like, learn what to change and keep the original published. This is overall a very solid story, and even if it gets discontinued, the progress you've made (100k) should be saved.

It's hunter, from youtube. I believe you left this on cal's discord. I hope you see this.

It's rough, you're not wrong. The writing gets a little awkward and stilted at parts, I feel like you'd appreciate that honesty. However stilted it is, you shouldn't delete it. Your emotional depth is on display her, as is your ability to set a scene and characterization. This story isn't without value.

you don't have to keep writing this, but I hope you don't stop writing.

I appreciate this story even if it's discontinued I got the gist of where this story was heading. I'm also a new reader and a new Falling Petals shipper soooo... yeahhhhh. Great fic still! XoXo to the author and all!

OHHHHHHHH GOD. This chapter. So nice. SO. VERY. NICE. I'm dying from the cuteness of this chapter. Someone get me a Medic, I need Healing!

iam an orignal reader and i think that you did a good job, this story gave me the power to save my friends that went through depression and save my self so thank you for making me happy armv7

You know, if you are really having a lot of trouble finishing the story you could just post what you wanted to do for the next chapters all the way to the end, it would at least give the story some closure.

I really like it. Rough as you said, but I hope you get your confidence back!

I am looking forward to the next chapter! Glad to see your back!