Reviews for Growing Up
Imadogperson chapter 20 . 4/22/2019
I normally don't like it, but maybe skipping through time showing the important parts of their lives, i.e. graduation, introduction to the parents(?), proposal, children (haha maybe even meeting the child's significant other), all told in the form of an epilogue by one of the four, after the others have already died of natural causes(i mean old age), as a recollection of their best moments in life, during their last moments in life. As a story to their grandchildren or great grandchildren, asking them to remember them and hold them dear in their hearts, setting them on a good(in the virtuous sense) path. It may be kinda an overused cliche, but there's a reason cliches work so well. The reason I suggested this as a conclusion was that even though I'm still young, I wish to live a long life that ends happily without regrets, I want to be able to speak to my children and grandchildren and have them see how proud I would be of them, I would want to be able to look back over my life and remember the exact moment when I first met the most important person in my life, and see how our relationship grew into a truly happy one, and how that happiness only grew exponentially over time, never fading. Of course I would also want to be the intelligent and witty, 'cool uncle' figure.(Maybe kinda like Qrow after toning down the alcohol a little bit (not too much though))
GrnDrgnzrd chapter 20 . 2/14/2019
Lol. It's good to have support in stressful situations. See you next chapter.
SabelRose chapter 19 . 6/13/2018
Love the story
Wish this chapter was a bit longer
Nagaichi chapter 19 . 5/8/2018
Still loving it!
RWBYGuy2015 chapter 19 . 5/6/2018
Ayyy glad to see this back with another great chapter looking forward to seeing what happens
ChaoticPawz chapter 18 . 8/19/2017
Not bad, I don't really see an issue with how fast you paired everyone up since it works and is your own fan fic. Dunno how I feel about Cinder being the mom and all but meh it works xD - hopefully you update and keep going! Love it!
RWBYGuy2015 chapter 18 . 8/10/2017
I wonder if Pyrrha will be a new struggle for Yang now and if Yang is going to push her away after what she said so as not to hurt Blake or have any confusion. OH THIS IS SO INTERESTING.
Nagaichi chapter 18 . 7/27/2017
Still awesome
SirDoge chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Not sure if I should hate or not hate
awakenreader chapter 10 . 4/10/2016
omgg...that was so funny
IanBlackwing chapter 17 . 1/6/2016
You have earned my interest. Also, if you ever want a proofreader or someone to bounce ideas off of or maybe help with lemon scenes, I'd be willing to help.
EternalPKK chapter 17 . 1/4/2016
Just read through the story, and I'm loving it.
SilverCivic chapter 17 . 1/2/2016
Yes. Yes! YES! That was what I've been waiting for! Yang asking Blake out, or the other way around, but yes finally! Beautiful work, just beautiful, awesome, I love it! Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more update from you this year (-)
SilverCivic chapter 16 . 11/9/2015
Beautiful chapter, Ruby and Weiss are cute together and Blake and Yang being together just makes my heart swell, I can't wait for more updates, so keep up the good work (-)
Phoenix Commander chapter 16 . 11/9/2015
Oh Ruby, when will you learn to slow down with the alcohol? I can sympathize with Blake's frustration, programming can be a pain. Keep up the great work, catch you in the next update.
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