Reviews for Zero Summing
Kurosu Cross chapter 47 . 7/1
Well ...

didn't see that coming
Full-Paragon chapter 37 . 6/29
Good to see Henri didn't fall to cynicism. That way lies, well, the sort of hot mess Louise has become. There's more to life than realpolitik.
Full-Paragon chapter 34 . 6/28
At first I thought Louise had turned into a daemon prince, or maybe a Blood Angel. Then a tyranid.

But nope, apparently she's a clan battlemech now.

Very satisfying ending to that particular arch. Don't know how I feel about Queen Henri. Maybe she can get her shit together. Maybe she'll marry Louise and let her consort run things.

And maybe Louise will die, and get turned into a dreadnought, because even in death, she still serves.
Full-Paragon chapter 33 . 6/28
I think Louise is too small to be a natural disaster, which makes her a decidedly unnatural one.
Full-Paragon chapter 32 . 6/28
Well, that was a surprise, but I guess I shouldn't have been that shocked. While Vampires are clearly inferior to werewolves, at least that makes Louise nearly as much of a monster as she thinks she is.

I liked the battle at the end too, nice little turnabout from the Spanish Armada.
Full-Paragon chapter 31 . 6/28
And you accuse me of too much shipping. Here you are shipping Louise with every skirt that shows her kindness.
Paragon chapter 30 . 6/27
It seems Louise has taken uncle Joe's Advise: Death solves all problems. No man, no problem.

But damn, that was brutal. And we finally get a look at some deeper lore. I forget what all this means but it's cool and I'm enjoying the ride.
TheFabled27 chapter 10 . 6/25
How was Louise gifted with dragon blood when she wasn’t even born on nirn? Does Akatosh reign over her planet as well?
Full-Paragon chapter 29 . 6/24
I know that Louise is in a happy place when the first thing she considers is assassination, followed by genociding the elves. God damn, would it have killed her mother to show her a little affection?

And I was right. London is a hell, and it looks like it's time for Louise to RIP AND TEAR.

Also Jesus Christ the original was a comedy? What the heck did they do to you, man.
Full-Paragon chapter 28 . 6/24
My opinion is that Louise is about to walk into a hell that will make the Siege of Windhelm look like a walk in the park.

And that Not-England is in for a hell of a long recovery. It is good to see Louise Murderhoboing her way to success though.
Full-Paragon chapter 27 . 6/24
Alright. So, Tiffania has established herself as the frontrunner in the "Best Girl" competition. Louise, of course, is not in that competition, because she is Dovahkiin. Also, who the Best Girls seem to be competing for. Seriously, she needs a hug and maybe a few weeks of vacation where she doesn't have to gut anyone she doesn't want to.

And also, probably somewhere far away from nobles and politics.

Finally, I have a feeling that Karin needs a boot up her ass. Or, possibly, one removed because it got stuck there.
Full-Paragon chapter 26 . 6/24
It makes sense that Louise would have a few issues with the knife ears. Also, how the heck did you manage to turn what was essentially Tits McGee: Adventures in Ecchi into a complex political drama?
Full-Paragon chapter 25 . 6/24
You know, at some point, Louise is going to have to decide which of these nice girls she's going to settle down with and which she's going to brutally murder.
Full-Paragon chapter 23 . 6/24
Aww, Louise made a friend. It would have been cooler if it were a werewolf/vampire friendship, but I shall accept this as well.
Full-Paragon chapter 22 . 6/24
You know, the fact that Louise is a Daedric champion is just...well, it explains a lot. And also, I think she needs a hug.
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