Reviews for When Two Universes Collide
Saiyanwarrior22 chapter 34 . 7/3
I love the story. But I just feel like as a dragon ball story, it needs some more action. The romance isn’t too bad but I just think it should be toned down some. But please continue!
matt chapter 34 . 6/14
this is such a great story man! i hope you keep it up and work hard, you seriously have talent, keep it up you got this!
yasserkend8 chapter 34 . 6/1
Please do continue this story I adore it you have single handedly made the best crossover couple ever in Rias x goten and made me fall for goten x marron too so I have seen some bad reviews on this story but don't let that get you down because there will always be support for this fanfic so I hope you update consistently someday.
Petrox chapter 6 . 5/25
stopped reading after this chapter. I can't handle a person that leaves a murderer and tried to kill Issei many times and let him go. I know saiyans are worse letting Freezer go first, letting Vegeta go, letting the androids creation. They just want to fight. I guess they are morally neutral, but a psycho murderer letting go knowing he will do more.. I just can't. Also waiting till night for Asia to follow Canon for no apparent reason I find it lazy writing.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/13
What’s wrong with SSJG and ssjblue
Mideku Brandio chapter 4 . 5/4
This is just my thoughts by I'd like to see this story go down the dragonball super route. It'd be cool to see the interactions of Sirzechs and Beerus or Zamasu/Goku Black and Azazel. But that's just my opinion, you don't have to listen to me.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30
Asco de historia ascoooooo
DoctorWho507 chapter 8 . 4/21
you gonna update?
p6lishb6kser chapter 31 . 4/18
Seriously dude this fanfic is great but once again when Marron showed up I skipped 1/3of a chapter... Seriously every interaction between her and others is so bad I'm simply skipping it
p6lishb6kser chapter 29 . 4/18
I skipped almost all chapter while your story is really good I'll drop it if I'll read more about Marron
p6lishb6kser chapter 28 . 4/18
It was first chapter that I didn't liked Marron is terrible
Louis XII chapter 2 . 3/29
ok Has Goten swapped at least one chapter for his brain with Issei?

I do not know Dbz enough and even less its characters to pronounce me but this chapter is simply horrible

I want to facepalm at the simple reading of this chapter because you have to be perverted to have your eyes on Rias' Oppais but above all incredibly stupid to swallow the lies of Rias!
it sounds horribly wrong!

as if Goten's brain was plugged into his d ... rather than having a logical and rational reaction!
Guest chapter 34 . 3/8
Like the story, ombut please at least xenovia,koneko t ravel apart of the harem keep
Mideku Brandio chapter 34 . 3/7
I absolutely love this story, the way you made the worlds of dragon ball and highschool dxd merge was perfect. Every single thing makes sense, like of course majin buu was a formidable villain for every one and of course goku would be known across all 3 factions. The only thing I have a question about is what was Dabura's deal in this world? Since he was the king of the demon realm in dragon ball, would've he been a maou of the underworld like Sirzechs or something else? Anyway I bid you luck with this story, I love it so much. And you don't have to listen to me but it would be awesome if you made a side story that focuses on Trunks and Tsubaki. I personally prefer Trunks over Goten so I would really like it if you did that, but again you don't have if you don't want to.
nishchaysoccer chapter 1 . 2/27
Please don't make goten a devil
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