So what taking so long busy with stories or making more chapters for this story secret

It's been awhile. I decided to get back to reading this. Mostly because I've reinvigorated my interest in tokusatsu like Kamen Rider, Super Sentai, Metal Heroes, and Ultraman. I'm glad to see the story has continued. Keep going.

Good book can't wait to read next chapter

Great chapter can't wait to read the next chapter

When will you post a new chapter

Wait can Kouta/Gaim eat regular food it wasn’t really explained well at the end cause he is an inverse technically so Helheim fruit does taste good to him also he can use Lockseeds to eat

Good book can't wait to read next chapter

when can we expect an update?

The Six Demons are here.

Please continue

Hey I was wondering if u ever get to it how are u gonna do the 7 year time skip? I mean if this story is after the gaim and drive movie then 7 years later will be in the new era after heisei so idk how are u gonna do that

Have ideas for the tenrou island arc

Is there alchemy in fairy tail? because if it does eiji might gind a way to bring ankh back!

Can you make a funny moments with eiji's underwear it would be funny

Hey dude, you're story is honestly actually really fun to read though I have to say I have quite a bit of criticism over the many (and I mean many, I'm a very bored guy) times I've reread this.

Okay, first things first, your style. You always write the actions and the description in present tense. I know fanfics aren't like traditional novels but, dude, it's a common consensus that they should be written in past tense. Not sure if I have ever read a novel in present tense in my life. Granted I like how you write the action scenes, even if they're long but it's based on anime so you get a pass on that, the present tense writing always throws me off and makes a bit uncomfortable to read. At least for me. Present tense writing, I'm not sure if it's true, for stories are probably best in Screen plays, not novels like this one which I'm assuming is the style your going for. If that's not your style then okay, but you may want to have it be read by other people who will be critical of you; you can't run a story on fan service alone, you need to have a good style otherwise that's the only thing your story will be known for.

Second, you're too wordy. You write about how the scene looks like if it were in an anime, mentioning things like "speech bubbles" or "sweat drops". Keep in mind a reader has to be in the shoes of the one if the perspectives and when reading and the number one rule in story telling is show don't tell. You don't have to write what the characters are doing specifically in one scene at an anime, it's a bit jarring and gets the flow breaks off when you mention these parts.

Now on to the story, the Riders I feel like have little impact on dialogue. Granted they are important to the story and help it move along but they're dialogue with other characters are just comments or observations from other characters in the anime and they just said it themselves. The least you can do is have one of those characters not say they're dialogue part and have the Riders say it in a different way, and have them maybe contribute to the dialogue a little and help add insight. It makes them feel more natural to the world they're living in. I think the best example to get ideas on how to do this would be Kingdom Hearts because, well, Kingdom Hearts.

Finally, some small stuff that I don't personally like, not something you have to change for others but something that bothers me a little. You don't have to add the sound effect of the transformation sounds when they transformation, like Double's guitar riffs from transforming. You can get them out and I bet they'd still read fine. Next, unless your using it as the transformation call, henshin is not a verb. De-henshin is not a verb in any dictionary not even in Japan engrish (yes, I meant engrish). No offense but it can make you sound like a weeb and weeaboos aren't exactly accepted online or anywhere (except with each other, but that flock isn't accepted for good reason. Look up some of their stories). If you're looking for a verb I usually use "cancelled their transformation" or "reverted", the latter is the antonym of transform.

Anyway that's all I got, you probably don't like long comments and will probably skip this over but I hope you read this one day. Even if you don't plan to be a writer no one should stop honing their writing skills and should take more criticism and learn to improve. I'm not bashing, I just want to tell you some major problems I had with the way you write. I hope you continue on writing this and I hope this turns out to be a great story!