Fucking amazing *claps*

That was a nice story, but the “HinataxRTNNaruto” tag at the end of the summary for some reason made me expect a completely different story, like Hinata somehow winds up in the world from RtN and her interactions with Menma completely changes his relationship with his/RtN Hinata... yeah, so it was a bit confusing when that plot point never landed - am I the only nitwit who thought that? - but otherwise it was a sweet story with a cute ending, with a healthy amount of lemon zest.

I was kind of expecting the switcharoo with regular Hinata to take place by the time they met up at the nightclub, then I was thinking, “ooh, is RtN Hinata going to go out for breakfast and never come back and Menma is going to find regular Hinata? That might be fun,” but your ending was very nice.

There was a whole lot of swearing, which I suppose was appropriate, and I hope you don’t think my saying “I thought this was a completely other story” was my attempt at constructive criticism, I just thought it was a bit funny because I sooo got the wrong end of the stick from 1 little thing, hehe...

aww I didn't expect this - the ending was so cute I couldn't stoo smiling! I love their kind of relationship - and the fact that they can't without each other

Awesome!

Yo. I was so tense reading this. I was waitinh for the romance to show.

That was pretty great. I really can’t thinknof a better ending for two such Chaotic people in Chaotic love.

I Really liked it!
Good end!

this is the most realistically accurate representation of a fiery romance between teens or young adults! This is the kind of relationship that will last and I'm happy to read this wonderful story!

Please update hero quest

Loved it seeing bad girl Hinata and bad boy Naruto/Menma is just great especially how you set up there relationship, but both still love each other.

I really want to see what they like when married and RTN Himawari and Boruto. I have a feeling those two are the kind to fuck each other even if the kid interrupted them.

As always it was great hearing from you again I can't wait to see what you update next.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Would be cool if you make a RTN Hinata attitude on Hinata in the normal Narutoverse with Naruto being like he is in cannon.

aawwww, Naruto is such a sweetheart inside :') thank you for finishing this story btw! :D now i'm gonna wait for My Lucky Charm hehehee

What a coincidence, I was just rereading this story yesterday. Anyway, I'm glad you finally got around to finishing it with a great happy ending. :)

The ending of the story is very unexpected for me because I thought there will be more chapters in this fanfic neverthless, I am glad of the outcome of the story. And thank you for writing this story.