..is Penny gonna die?-

the story actually feels like it has a different plot than canon. Love the epic reveal btw.

that extra was brilliant.

This is some anime reference that I missed, right!?

I absolutely adore this story and hope to see it updated again some day, but more than that I want to thank you for writing it. I love the concept of social innocence not being the same as naïveté or innocence in general. Just because someone was desensitized to violence doesn’t mean they’re jaded or that they enjoy it. It just means that they should be given a chance to not have to rely on that violence anymore.

I don’t really know how I feel about the dynamic between Ruby and Rose. On the one hand I can see they both deserve to be happy, but at the same time I can’t help but feel they’re doing more damage to themselves. Watching them both trying so hard really pulls on the heartstrings.

I don’t know what’s happening in your personal life, and you certainly don’t owe us any explanations if you don’t want to give them. This is me just wishing you happiness and good fortune as a thank you for the wonderful experience your writing has given me.

If this is sort of a magical representation of DID then I must say it is amazingly accurate!

I jackoff ot this

Gotta be honest, this chapter basically proved the opposite of what Weiss was hoping. She literally couldn't do a thing against Ruby.

Does Weiss really think she won? At all?One, all the damage Ruby straight up did to herself, hell she was responsible for the vast majority of her Aura loss as well.

Where the hell is Crescent Rose?

Not Ruby with no big ass scythe.

man zwel is deep

A giant grimm whale called Moby, you have litteraly predicted the future.

Tasting each other’s crepes... another innuendo for the book.

I’m already liking this

I am absolutely enarmored with the story! Please give me and everyone else more!