that was good keep the chapters coming

I would love to read more please!

Great story, but Hinata's "private punishment" is just a little excessive in my opinion.

Poor little guy! I hope hinata and him become friends sooner, only them can help each other. Update soon

Damnnnnnnnnn, I knew that fate is cruel but still. There's no words to describe this. Hinata and Naruto live horrible, horrible lives and it isn't fair. I wish that I could help them

This is such a painful and sad story! Both of them suffering like that! It's inhumane! I hope something would happen and save them from their pain! Update soon!

You need to up your production in order to stop Kīlauea. The lava will stop to read your fics and you'll prevent the hyperactive, erupting-longer-than-I've-been-alive, lava-spewing monolith (Oahu is technically the tallest mountain on the planet! Take that Everest!) from doing any more damage!

Looking forward to your take on this fic.

If you continue the same story as the original version (Spoilers)
then why is the nine tales the only secret that needs to be told why not tell the public who is also his parents are as well to counter balance their plans

Poor Naruto. I hope this Ryu gets beaten by someone for this. Preferably by someone named Ken.

Glad you picked this up, friend. But, dayum, this fic is dark...

Keep up the good work!

one of the darkest chap I've read, please let them be together and I hope they don't forgive the people who have wronged them and please let it stay, naru hina, don't include anko as in, the original

I'm only going to say this. I expect Naruto and Hinata to destroy Konoha at the end.

Wow… That's pretty sad, sadistic and evil
good chapter

Damn poor Naruto just wish back then he had control over Kyuubi's power would have loved to see him tear that teacher apart, anyways keep up the great work!

These kids didn't deserve such abuse. Keep going.