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From the comments in China, you have finally drawn me out of hiding to review... Good story, ... But I feel like oh. Idea: Create another fanfic that's a spinoff of this detailing Hiccup's time in dragon city.

Did a re-read on this... better than I remebered it!

I am willing to believe that this story has something to offer but your writing style is just very boring.

Like how u started the chap

A few chapters ago I said to myself, “if anything happens to Wrenlou I don’t know if I can keep reading. I will be so upset if wrenlou gets hurt,”

Depending on the time the story, is set Spain wouldn't of existed. It would have been either Granada or Castile. However you could of just called it the Iberian Peninsula, which is what that landmass is called (Portugal and Spain nowadays).

I know I’m a little late to the story, but this has to be one of my favorite stories I have ever read on . I love the characters, especially Wrenlou. Thank you for creating this story because reading each part of it has been a bright part in the last couple of days I’ve been reading it.

Would like to mention you forgot about Spineless.

good

... after all I read HE BETTER NOT BE DEAD

I just had to come back here and reread this after seeing the light fury in HTTYD3 trailer. I'm also going to reread the adventures of Hiccup and wrendlou for old time sake

Aah wrenlow is like a second father to him

AHHHHHHH! I WAS TOO BUSY READING TO COMMENT BUT IF YOU KILL TOOTHLESSS, THE WRATH OF THE GODS WILL RAIN DOWN APON YOU!

I liked how the story started but I have to say as it progresses I'm getting disappointed. I feel like Hiccup comes across as incredibly whiny and grudgeful, in the way he keeps bringing things back to having been ignored or hurt in the past. It's like an easy way to make people shut up by guilt tripping them.
Chief Stoick and Astrid especially. And the whole emphasis he keeps putting on Wrenlou is so... Unnecessary. 'i couldnt count on you like I do on wrenlou' 'wrenlou will keep me safe' 'wrenlou wrenlou wrenlou'
I actually liked your OC but I don't like how Hiccup compares everyone to him.
And then Astrid... I have only seen the first movie. But I can't imagine her falling in love just like that. I ignored it for the sake of the other plot. But she's become this clingy tearful eager and submissive gf. So yh. Kinda sorry I can't push through the last 20 chapters.

Oh my goodness, I'm not sure who the annoying little brother is here.

AH! Oh. My. Goodness! I loved this story! I love reading fanfiction to my sister and this is definitely going on the list. I can't wait to check out the sequel.

Thanks for the awesome ride!

God Bless,
Tauriel Skywalker