Reviews for Sorry's Not Enough
Cyril Kain chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
This is why I reject the canon ending. Naruto HATED growing up without parents, he'd do ANYTHING to prevent his own kids from going through the same, or worse, be alive and not there for his kid, which is exactly what he let that arrogant little shit, Boruto, go through. Besides, with his abuse of shadow clones, how is he always swamped with work? How, in an age with what equates to a surface computer, does he have THAT much paperwork?

How much of a doormat is Sakura, who kept chasing after a psychopath who tried to murder her three times? I know she has issues, but she's not that stupid!

Pure bullshit and lazy ass writing are all we can expect from the author of Naruto now.
thedarkpokemaster chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
Whoa this was so good, and you're right far better than the ending in which Sasuke simple got away with it all, and just because he helped save the world, to me that was not good enough, he still caused so much pain and killed many people as well.

So what you gave Sasuke as a punishment was very fitting, true many would as shouldn't Sasuke carry on his blood-line, yeah I think we have all see how that turned out.

I have to add I love how you named the NS child Haku.
MitchellTF chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
...Poor Hinata.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
I quite agree. That would have made a very powerful and satisfied ending.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
Yep this how it should have happened
Radita chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
Kishimoto really doesn't understand women at all. But if there is anything more unrealistic than sasusaku,it is you.
stranrep chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
"And that's how the series should have ended". Totaly agree. While I'm not a fan of Naruto-Sakura pairing, it's FAR BETTER than Sakura-Sasuke.
Reaper's Blaze chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
You used to be one of my favorite authors, now I can see you're just like every other hack on this site.
abandonedaccount11392945 chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
According to my head-canon THIS is how the series officially ended.

Not Sasuke being forgiven for everything because "Hey man thanks for saving the universe even though you were partially responsible for that and have also been responsible for the deaths of many of our loved ones and friends but it's all good man!"
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
I have to agree. Sasuke did enough to earn several death sentences. If he committed seppuku, I'd respect him more.
Maileesaeya chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
I can't disagree with your sentiment on how the series should have ended, though I honestly gave up entirely partway through the war (a bit after Neji's death, actually).

I'm glad I came across this and I want to thank you for writing it. Setting aside shipping for a moment (though I do prefer Naruto with Sakura), it's really hard to find a fic, short or long, that treats the characters fairly instead of villifying them for whatever reason (and this is especially problematic for me because I was fond of pre-Itachi Sasuke and loathed the direction his character took).

So, again, thank you for writing this and posting it for others to read and enjoy.
kidloco chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
yes im wiht you...
Deadmatter chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
This would have been better without NaruSaku. This was good, on the sole basis that you made Sasuke get what he rightfully deserved. I am not a shipper mind you.
Yatsushiro Ryko chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
Much better ending i agree.
Dante 101 chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
I have to say, looking back, the ending could've been done better. I wished that Sasuke was punished for his actions instead of being granted leniency.
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