Wait, isn’t Winter the older sister?

I liked the Fallout New Vegas reference. The last thing you never see, indeed.

Loved this story, can't wait to read the sequel!

okay... Overall, character interactions and anything not related to the plot were mostly good.

The plot was not. and made no sense. anything related to cinder, neo or team cfvy could be dropped without changing the story. the kidnapping makes no sense. In the real world, it would make the characters lose trust and faith in qrow and end up with a badly injured shun. not laugh it off and continue training. Certain scenes were good. there is no ending to the story and no real story to begin with.

I am dissappointed by that because it had a strong start. very strong in fact. but, I am left with many questions, the most important one being: why do these characters shrug off everything? Why do they focus on romance when they have a missing team member? Why are they fine with people who sre clearly not deserving of their respect and should in fact be attacked in a lethal manner? (cinder did something to weiss. shun kidnapped ruby. dont you think that the girl who beat up people for calling ruby names wouldnt actively try to kill the person who kidnapped her?)

So... I know this has nothing to do with this chapter but... could it be that you completely forgot that Ruby said she was adopted in an earlier chapter? Just wondering.

manga is superior to comics in every way imaginable

Switch everything from 1st Person to Third Person. Then I'll try again.

Really well made story btw. 10/10

But... But what about Weiss visiting her father with all of them?

Was that an HunterXHunter reference?

ive noticed in fanfics there is at least one character that slips up and cracks the 4th wall

ive noticed in fanfics there is at least one character that slips up and cracks the 4th wall

Nice RvB reference.

Please update! You're the best writer ever!

Can u make a story about Neo's inside voices? Maybe like a oneshot or something because their banter is hilarious.