| Reviews for Shinachiku's First Adventure |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/22 How is this fanfiction any different than Studio Pierrot version of Naruto last movie in next-generation yes you had some couples but I disagree with Hinata and Kiba can't you see it as fanfiction you did the very same thing they did |
| Narusaku lover chapter 54 . 4/30 Oh i know it naruto will be killed by sugure mashita and sakura dies when gave birth to arashi okay first in first chapter you make the narusaku love and then you destroy narusaku shinachiku first adventure was so perfect but you destroy it with make naruto dies and sakura dies |
| Guest chapter 41 . 4/29 Wowowoqowowoqo i love it so much the movie will be named as ninja infinty war but i think there is so much more scenes about narusaku and shinachku and hanami so... error no idea |
| Mister narusaku chapter 39 . 4/29 Ok i thing this is not naruto shippuden but marvel infinty ninja war and we can look at the picture of the movie uragi holding all chakra gems and shinachiku |
 C. S. Tolkien chapter 55 . 9/6/2019 Wow, what a story so corny, very, very, very corny, it have excellent moments, but still very corny. And literature is a visual medium, more and less, you still have to use your imagination, but what I am trying to say is that music never translated well in this medium, because, one, people actually need to know the song, and two, lyrics really don't help at all, if would write narrative, write narrative, if you would write dialogue, write dialogue, but never, ever, ever, ever, add lyrics, that destroy the flow of the story. |
| lovecrazyhedgehog chapter 42 . 9/4/2019 I don't think I've hated an oc character this much before pretty sure I've never hated any character this much before |
| lovecrazyhedgehog chapter 4 . 9/2/2019 And here I was thinking you based them off of the chaos emeralds |
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/23/2019 Can't really read the story...don't know when narusaku got together so it won't make sense without knowing that IMPORTANT factor...stupid |
| Luckyfuzzball17 chapter 2 . 4/21/2019 I am amazed that you coyld call your own peice of writing boring, especially when it is anything but! |
| Luckyfuzzball17 chapter 1 . 4/21/2019 Amazing! |
| Minashi-NoBaka chapter 3 . 1/6/2019 Do you know? after reading all your fic, I sure say that you are the strongest fan of Narusaku. Why? because after Naruto and Sakura were not put together by Kishimoto, you could still be able to do research to turn on this fic. honestly, I'm not even strong just looking at sakura-Chan's face now. |
| Minashi-NoBaka chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 Do you know? after reading all your fic, I sure say that you are the strongest fan of Narusaku. Why? because after Naruto and Sakura were not put together by Kishimoto, you could still be able to do research to turn on this fic. honestly, I'm not even strong just looking at Sakura-Chan's face now. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/24/2018 I'm not a fan of shipping so I'm about to say he does not come from either side equation but the fanfiction writers of Naruto are hypocrites most of them |
| Sasa chapter 55 . 12/12/2018 Thank you very much for this awesome story! This has been a great read. I don't regret my time reading this even though I have a lot of things to do for school hahahaha! You made me very happy. I am and forever will be a Narusaku fan. Now I'm looking forward to your other stories! Arigato! |
| Sasa chapter 45 . 12/12/2018 Neji I love you... That line is so Nejihina! Sorry... But I can't help it. I love them together. Hehehehe... |
