I admit, I don't much like it when important events are mentioned as memories. I would have preferred that we get to see the teachers' reactions to Jaune telling the truth in the present. In a way, the whole story was somehow leading to that moment, but it was passed off as almost nothing in a few paragraphs. I do hope that when he tells RWBY, that we get to see their reactions

I have a soft spot for Weiss, whenever she's either physically or emotionally hurt, I actually feel physically sick. She's just... the best, but also the one who suffers the most. I dunno, my male protective instincts go into overdrive with her.

That said, I legitimately cried manly tears of joy when Penny gave her the picture Blake sent :p

can I say I just love how you portray Roman as usual

You gotta love cillit bang.

also lastly.

the reason that Aladdin's music was amazing was just how expressive Robin Williams was as a voice actor.

he made everything come alive because he literally held nothing back in his roles and always went full tilt.

for example I love Will Smith as an actor (he's actually my favorite)

but he could not fill Robin's shoes in that role. they would have been better to use Robin's Audio and CGI'd Genie to look like him to honor him.
but thats my opinion.

have a good one!

this Omake is the real reason to read this story

holy shit man way to prove your skill.

i literally read this from beginning to end in Genie's voice in perfect timing.

and hot damn finally!

i usually wait til the end to post a comment on finished works but this was just required!

I'll preface this with the fact that I've enjoyed your work greatly. I read Tournament Arc before this and it was some of the best stuff I've ever read period, both professional and non, and I've continued to be impressed.

On a completely different note, I'm currently on my way to practice with some big name Jazz cats in my area, so reading Port's opinion was hilarious, and almost ironic, if that word applies in this case.

It's hard re-reading this knowing that Glynda and Jaune broke up. ;-;

So... after all this, nothing has changed.
Seriously?
The level of railroading is actually quite annoying.

yeah I already know agreeing to this favor is gunna fuck jaune over

that doctor better be dead as fuck dude

Nice Joseph Joestar impression here at the end!

This was one of the most awesome and character driven storys I've read barring a couple of others
Hope you keep writing

"She'd kind of forgotten, but the Deathstalker had hit right when they'd picked up the relics"
But they only fought Nevermore, ain't they? Since the only person stupid enough to venture into cave with "beware of deathstalker" warnings was on the cliffs, it really should stay where it were.

I always come back to read the song at the very end BECAUSE ITS HILARIOUS AND BEAUTY AND BRINGS A TEAR TO MY EYE