Reviews for Praeludium and Allegro
MamaHooterz chapter 32 . 17h
Don't you dare turn this into a trap or Genjutsu, this has, HAS to be real! She needs to be free! :'D
DJzash chapter 32 . 8/1
Damn, all I can say is I regret how long it took for me to find this fic. Binge read it in a day, RIP studying lol. Looking forward to your next update, thank you!
jjjmmm009 chapter 10 . 7/31
I can't go on anymore. The MC is downright pathetic and a coward. No, I get it she's afraid, but to run away from your problem is pathetic. Why hide your intelligence and ability? To lower expectation? Yeah right.

Why right a Naruto fanfic if the MC's motivation is to be civilian? It's like writing a magical fantasy fic on a muggle's perspective where the magic remains mystery and a background. There's not much character and world building in this story. I wonder how this fic is still ongoing when it's terrible to read from the start.
RandomCitizen chapter 32 . 7/29
Huh. Shoyo may be a bit two-faced but he's alright. Must have some extra benifit for this operation and maybe doing it for his son (after all, he was a bit spoiled-acting when they first met).

This is gonna be big. If no identity change there will be high chance of war. Not to mention rep ruining. There must be some plans in case Haru ever returned.
SnowingCrystals chapter 32 . 7/29
god, I love this. poor yuzu, poor haru, poor everyone, ('cept minato and most of the adults, kinda totally pissed at them) I hope they can just...be happy, this isn't going to be easy but I'm rooting for them, brilliant writing as always!
WebNovelMonster chapter 3 . 7/26
Goddammit, I was getting into it and it’s a fucking female si
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 32 . 7/25
Loved it!
dustinpuffer chapter 19 . 7/25
I dont know if it was because personally I have more life experiences or something but lord Haru dumb as fuck. Also no spine, this is straying more and more from whag the story promised.

But please dont get me wrong this is am awesome story, just I didnt really see the adults realistically and this was a wake up call. Maybe that why I am so frustrated
dustinpuffer chapter 18 . 7/25
I meant well ... I really love Minato and Kushina but your story, I dont know if it was intentional or not makes me hate all adult.
dustinpuffer chapter 16 . 7/25
I don't think I have a very troubled childhood but darn it all of the adult in your story are infuriating
dustinpuffer chapter 8 . 7/25
I don't know if it your intention or not but the last 2 chapters was really frustrating? I get that the protagonist didn't want to become a ninja but didn't want to outright say it and she still on the young side so coercion by adult was possible and all that.

But it was really frustrating to read. Can't wait for more tho. I'm genuinely find this story interesting and want to see the direction you are taking this.

Thank you very much for sharing this story
xcandiedoll chapter 32 . 7/24
Ahh its so hard to trust again. Im still vindictive even though Im glad there are people who want to save her. Really ironic how the people she knew who had power weren't able to do the same. Trash.
Hmm I like the Diplomat's character. I feel like something will happen to his son with their attempt to save Haru though.
SuzyQBeats chapter 32 . 7/23
Wow I love this update!
Entranced by you chapter 32 . 7/23
HAHAHA IM SORRY, MY THOUGHTS WENT PLOP.

"Oh, okay then, fuck you. Good bye."

*insert circus music*

"Ayo, WAIT!"

The end.

but that aside,,,, thanks for the update! thank you for the new chapter :DD
Guest chapter 32 . 7/22
This is a really good fic, though looking at the Dates it’s taken a stupid amount of time to write.

I wish you luck on completing it!

Thank you for the fic.
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