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Ottima storia complimenti!

Ottimo

buenisimo, que mal que ya no actualizes

Chibi Indra and Chibi Ashura getting along!how cute!

WHY DID YOU ABANDON THIS?!

Dude...that was amazing I hope you’re still willing to update this bcz it an amazing story!

Holy shit this Fanfic is awesome, like, I can't stop from giggling madly.

Very good story.
I have read many times and still get a thrill out of this story.
Enjoyed reading (action and suspense).
Story could use some more romance/sex scenes (between Hinata and Naruto).
Needs to be continued, updated and completed (for your fans).

Very good story.
Enjoyed reading (action and suspense).
Needs to be continued, updated and completed (for your fans).

It's been a while since I read this. Highly enjoyable. I hope you update this again soon. If I didn't have other projects going on, I'd be tempted to do my own fic inspired by this one. Not sure if I could do the whole concept as much justice as you have, but I'd like to give it a shot one day.

So good

awww this is so great! I love all the relationships and how you've grown them. especially the interactions w the hyuuga, jiraiya and sasuke. I really hope you come back to this one dayI want to see how naruto grows! thanks for sharing!

Would you consider changing how Naruto refers to his parents? Calling them ma and pa feels really off. Especially because the toads called Ma and Pa got brought up right before he started doing that.

LOL, what a fun story. Serious with just a touch of crack... I can honestly see something like this happening, and I appreciate that. Rather enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to see where it goes. Looking forward to Naruto leading a couple of missions, training like there's no tomorrow (which, for him, there might not be) and the fall-out from Iwa when they find out that the son of the 4th is now Hokage...