Reviews for If tomorrow never comes
Jacal chapter 1 . 3/22
I still love it lol. More pls
SocialSuicideGirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
Ooooh it was a super disturbing premise but I had to keep reading because it was so well-written! If this makes any sense at all, I really feel like Hinata’s descent into Stockholm syndrome was really believable, but it also made me wonder just how easy it could have been to get her to Itachi the Hyuuga clan, at the right time in her story.

The glimpse we got of the rest of the Konoha 12, or at least Hinata’s team and what would have been Naruto’s team was really intriguing, but while it made me very curious about how this turn of events effected their characters and wonder if Ino/Shika/Cho were even alive, I suppose I respect the decision to not explore that angle further since it probably would have drawn the story waaay out several thousand words longer. It was a bit of an abrupt ending, but I still think it was fairly well-put, got in a bit of patricide, the end of Konoha... where else could you go from there anyway? Yep. Great story!
vlxsv chapter 1 . 11/22/2018
not gonna lie, that last part about her father was a little uncomfortable to read, but i understand where hinata was coming from. other than that, i loved it! especially naruto’s adorable curiosity lmfao
meliansama chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
One of my favorites AU's ever.
Simple, dark and beautiful.
You're a skilled writer, keep on this wonderful stories.
lala1224 chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
Can’t believe I’ve never reviewed this fic. It’s so dark and it’s EVERYTHING! I love this and idk why.
Fishies2 chapter 1 . 3/26/2018
Amazing
traced31 chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Don't know WHY I liked this. But boy did I!

Great job~
Cafrye chapter 1 . 1/14/2018
Well that was insanely dark, not that I mind. I often wondered why Naruto didn't have a little bit more darkness.
itsxoi chapter 1 . 8/23/2017
Is it wrong how I love the darkness of this fic? I absolutely adore the plot and how their love grew. I just wished there was some sequel though. But it doesn't change the fact with how beautifully interesting this fic is, especially for me. Hoping for more stories from you..
guitarlover04 chapter 1 . 8/5/2017
I absolutely love the darkness in this. There's something beautiful about their love, as fucked up as it is. Also, we never see a version of both characters like this. I wish you'd continue it. Either way, good job.
narutwo chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
Okay, holy shit. I had to read over the comments before me to make sure I'm not the only one going wherever for loving this. Maybe a little bit too much. I know this is a one-shot but i'd kill for another chapter or maybe even just another paragraph of naruhina aaaah
scruffylookingnerfherder89 chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
I don't think I have ever read a dark story I have loved as much as this one! Your story really pulls the reader in, which is awesome. I, especially, loved the way you ended it. I got chills as the last couple of lines. Great job!
TheNeedToLeave chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
Well... what happened to her teammates that were so desperately looking for her lol
freyja0taku chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Wow, it's great. Dark but awesome.
SalDalia chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
Discovering your work is the best Christmas. I loved it because I always imagined this version of Naruto if the hate and mistreatment had made him feral at a young age.
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