Reviews for Shadows on the Horizon
El Publicano chapter 5 . 8/9
:( no sé ha actualizado esto en un tiempo. Pero me gusta, también puedo ver qué parte de la etiqueta Harén es por la insinuación de dominación (maligna, por parte de los dos) y puedo entender por qué tener a ¿Subordinados glorificados? En fin. Me gusta esto.
Borello chapter 5 . 7/9
damnit. i hoped to read more chapter. i wonder if naruto and hinata become overlord/overlady.
EarlSilver chapter 5 . 6/7
I love it and hope for more. Though I understand if you dropped this in favor of life.
Silver chapter 5 . 2/28
Love it, may have some more please?
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 12/12/2019
Very good story.
Sometimes even evil can be good and do good.
Enjoyed reading (action and suspense).
Needs to be continued, updated and completed (for your fans).
Danny Williams chapter 2 . 10/24/2019
Enjoy dark Hinta and Naruto
Danny Williams chapter 5 . 10/24/2019
Completely different spin for Naruto and Hinta.
Like the way this story is going (plenty of action, romance/sex, what more can you ask for).
Needs a new update( before you forget and go to something completely different).
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 5 . 7/2/2019
Nice little story. Following.
Lobotomixx chapter 3 . 6/9/2019
Esta genial ojalá y no terminé su inspiración. Saludos cordiales
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 5 . 10/28/2018
A nice setup chapter, though you may want to go back and do a bit of editing, since the scene breaks were eaten. Even just an extra space would be good.

Well, I should probably write now that I am out of stuff to read.
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 4 . 10/28/2018
You know, if Naruto and Hinata just find a way to set Shino up with another of their agents, like Fu for example, they could solve their problems and gain more resources easily.

I can't wait to see the Hyuuga clan's reaction to the real Hinata and her relationship with Naruto.

Also, given my last review, you should absolutely ignore the poll results and add Karin and Tenten. Save them from frigid, dark-haired emo men!
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 3 . 10/28/2018
And in his study, Hiashi had the sudden urge to strangle every Uzumaki in the village, and no idea why.

Considering the rumors she heard about Hyuuga men, I wonder if Hinata will warn Tenten that she's wasting her time?

Also, if the Kumo Kidnapping still happened, I wouldn't be surprised if one of Hinata's goals is the destruction of Kumo, just in case, to keep Hanabi safe.

Nice job with the lemon. Just descriptive enough to get the point across and not devolve into juvenile linguistics. It was a very cunning use of words.

One bit of continuity error I've noticed: Naruto says that Hinata lit Mizuki on fire, but didn't he throw the match?
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 2 . 10/28/2018
Never finished the series, but the world's are meshing together much more cohesively than I thought they would. Props. Poor Hiashi. How can he defend against boys magically teleporting into his daughter's room?!

Poll picks: can't access it on mobile, so my choices are as follows.

1. Karin. Cute, intelligent, and under appreciated. Plus, it'll help Naruto rub Sasuke's face in the fact Madara wasn't good enough for an Uzumaki woman.
2. Shion. Aside from her looks, she can predict the future and has a connection to a minor demon that wants to rule the world. The plot writes itself.
Harmonious Arkos Sloth chapter 1 . 10/28/2018
Dark, yet oddly cartoonish and slap-stick. Well, burn-stick in Mizuki's case. Granted, considering the crossover, that is understandable.

I'm curious to see how far this goes. Underling Itachi, perhaps? He DiD commit familial genocide. Ohhh, how about a pool for Kisame to swim in that Naruhina can dramatically lower their enemies into?
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This is gonna be fun.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2018
By far my least favorite fic by my most favorite writer. Too out of character for me. Update chains of the kindred already! Twice!
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