Reviews for Waking Up to a Nightmare
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 17 . 10h
I wish there was another chapter. I wish she would just tell team 7 already. kakasi should be told at the very least. its not fair to them to create bonds with Juuko when its a fake persona.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/8
i dont even know why naruto is a female in this and jiraiya keep calling him godson is damn confusing. troublesome mind u got there.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/12
Thanks
Amaterasu53 chapter 17 . 3/11
really good story keep writing and updating please
Feiy chapter 17 . 2/7
This was an unexpectedly great time travel naruto story. I often need to drag myself through frequently repeated early Naruto storylines, however, this was the complete opposite. I found myself flying through the 200k words at an unbelievable pace. I liked your take on a female Naruto, it was nice that you didn't focus on romance, recognizing that she's still physically a child. I hope you'll come back to this at some point, I was excited to see Naruto venturing out of Konoha and taking out the Akatsuki.
Paul Lenzen chapter 17 . 11/19/2019
This is really good and I so f*cking hope that you someday finish it. Please please finish this work of art. Or at least tell me how you envisioned it to go.
FireDragonNaruto chapter 17 . 7/31/2019
Ummmmm...hey everyone i'm new on the site and I kind of need like a mentor/beta who will help me get better in writing and also edit/judge my stories and I'll help them in their stories since I'm an A English studen t also this story is one of the best I've read in a long time so ur a great author
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 2 . 7/17/2019
Does she get any doujutsu from hagaromo? Cuz that would be awesome!
PowerofBooks chapter 17 . 6/26/2019
Love this. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/21/2019
So confusing to read then you got fuuko's pov then naruto dunno what's happening anymore they like the same person soooooo...
Phillip chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
After you wrote 200,000 words and after I already read more than a full chapter (and nearly half of this one), I thought I should at least tell you why I will stop reading this and why I won't be coming back:

It's not because of a female Naruto. I usually don't particularly like that in any fanfiction, but I'm okay with it, even if there usually is no point.

It's also not because of grammar or spelling errors. That's the most frequent reason why I stop reading Naruto fanfictions, but yours has a very low number of those. So that's not a real issue either.

And it's also not because of your ridiculous idea that the Henge/Transformation is no real transformation but only an illusion. It's no. Never has been. In canon it was always a real true transformation, and not just for Naruto but for everyone. Why else would Sasuke not hesitate to throw a transformed Naruto (clone? not sure, but doesn't matter), if he had any reason to believe that the transformation into a shuriken was only an illusion? Why wouldn't he want to learn that oh-so-special transformation himself? Why would Gamabunta ask Naruto to transform them into something with claws and teeth, if those claws and teeth would only be illusions and therefore useless? Why would NOBODY EVER mention how special Naruto's transformation is? Simply because nobody was surprised by any of that, because being able to transform for real was somethin any graduate from any shinobi academy in any hidden village anywhere in the shinobi world has always been able to do.
And those above questions aren't even applicable here, since you belong to those few who even failed to notice that Naruto's transformations were real in canon, never mind that nobody was ever surprised about that.
But, while that is something that regularly pisses me off a bit, it's not that big a deal.

The reason why I will stop reading this is also not that it's a time travel and re-do story. I actually like that concept. But most of those stories are usually pathetically written. And that's exactly the point:
You gave me a very specific reason why I would most likely be unable to enjoy what you have written...

"She had to keep the timeline steady"

Yeah, right. Translation: Either she won't be making any changes at all, which would result in your story being a retelling of canon and nothing more, making this entirely pointless. Or she will be making changes, meaning the timeline WILL NOT be kept "steady". In other words: I call bullshit. Either your story is pointless or unlogical - or at least that's the impression you're giving me. Think before writing something like that!
Do you really want to tell me that she will let Sarutobi die? Or that not letting him die won't have far-reaching consequences? Or that she will (despite what she already thought on this matter) allow Sasuke to defect to Orochimaru? Or that Sasuke (or Orochimaru) dying before that would not have any real impact on the timeline?

Face it: That idea of keeping the timeline intact is crap, one way or another. It never results in a good story. And judging by the titles of the last chapters before you abandoned this story, you probably realized that you are unable to continue the story in any acceptable way beyond that magic Chunin-Exam-point where most authors give up.

Seeing all that, how could I possibly believe that I would not waste the next several days of my life, if I read what you wrote?

Hopefully, at least this review will help you somehow with future attempts at writing fanfiction.

PS: That talk with Sarutobi... I get the impression of two three-year-olds speaking to (not "with") each other, using words and phrases far bigger than themselves.
Adelene900 chapter 1 . 3/27/2019
I've been rereading this amazing story for the umpteenth time already.. but I've never get bored
KagedIn chapter 17 . 3/10/2019
Very interesting read! And I actually appreciate all the characters! Hope you may decide to continue this one day.
ChthonicUnraveling chapter 17 . 3/9/2019
That. Was. Awesome! I just read this entire story in two days, and I'm really impressed. I can't wait to see where this goes. I really hope you can update soon, author-san!
era-romance chapter 17 . 2/16/2019
hope u cone back soon
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