Was an enjoyable fic.

Sorry Weiss, but the sack over the head is all part of the kidnap experience. You wouldn't want her to half ass it would you?

Its a good chapter, but that contract literally isn't even worth the paper its written on. She is an adult and wasn't present nor consenting to it making it null and void. You can't just go write contracts out about people without there consent and expect it to be worth anything, if that was the case WhiteFang just need to write out a contract that SDC gives ownership of all assets to them and it would be binding and perfectly legal.

You know, just once it would be nice if her parents accepted her choice without much issue.

Wow, they where kinda useless here. And is Aura not a thing? How did Ruby break her leg if she has her Aura still as she obviously does?

Wow, total screw up with there parentage. Maybe you should fix that.

Wow, i agree with Weiss, Yang has problems.

Damn, Ruby got game.

What game did they play? I’ve been wondering this for so long, and I can’t figure it out.

Gahh this was such a great chapter! I love jealous Weissy XD. OoOo and the angst at the end just makes so tempted to binge read the see how it all plays out. Your writing is fantastic!

I love this story! Youre awesome! Thanks so much for sharing! Also this chapter was soooo great! Btw what chapter did was the first bath they had together again? I wanna reread it after this hahaha

Wow... That was fantastic. Perfectly sweet ending to a perfectly sweet story (not that I wouldn't mind a sequel or continuation lol). I really enjoyed this version of all the characters with a special shout out to our whiterose girls being beautiful and full of love and to Winter who you wrote wonderfully, she had me laughing way harder then I usually do at RWBY fics.

If anyone is looking for some wonderful Whiterose works this story and this author are where you want to be.

This story was amazing. If you have a sequel planned I would very much like to see it. Maybe one that follows the Canon, modified to fit what you have written so far. Amazing work, and I look forward to more of you works.

You truly are an artist now please excuse me while I try to find something else to fucking read that could possibly stand to this

That was nice... Now possibly on to some of your other works

I don't understand why winter's personality changed so drastically this chapter. Was she not trying to help them earlier?