Reviews for A Second Chance at Life
Nad19 chapter 8 . 7/20
uh, isn't he still 13 or so years old? is it normal to be that tall at that age?
Nad19 chapter 8 . 7/20
are you gonna use glamour? since he will be noticed if he changed too fast
Nad19 chapter 7 . 7/20
hmm I kinda didn't agree on instant harry/multi relationship, but I am quite interested how all of it will turn out
anthony1245 chapter 13 . 7/18
please update this story it's getting interesting
AngelAlexG chapter 1 . 7/6
0.0002% usable magic? It's just fucking ridiculous. What it cost to leave him I do not know between 10 and 30% of usable magic it remained impressive without being ridiculous as 0.0002% even 1% would have been less stupid.

Okay so "Super-Harry" is just another name for "Godlike Harry" shame.

Why 90% of Harry / Multi fanfics are always spoiled for "Super-Harry" and other "Godlike Harry" you can't make a powerful Harry without being omnipotent? His kills completely suspense he is so powerful that we are sure that nothing serious will happen to him.

Too bad there was a good idea though the fact that Harry is a little sisters, that he can resuscitate his parents, pairing, AD / RW / MW bashing (not everyone likes it but it can be interesting), time -travel.
alix33 chapter 13 . 6/23
Fawkes' exercise regime amused me, as did Hedwig having called him a fat turjey, which inititated said exercise regime.
You meant "his two followers' line of sight".
Harry's question to Daphne and Tracey and Hedwig head slapping him for it were both funny.
alix33 chapter 12 . 6/23
Padfoot's fluffy pink dog bed with the chew bone and his name on it is SO cute, if the mental pic I got of it is any indication.
I loved Harry's vindictive tone and the mental pic I just got of the harsh glint in his eyes.
alix33 chapter 11 . 6/23
Yay! for Luna having gotten her belongings back and the bullying having been stopped.
I would want to watch if Hedwig chose to fight with Fawkes all day. I think such a fight would be entertaining.
Yay! for Harry now being Luna's friend and for the prospect of Fawkes soon being her familiar and friend.
alix33 chapter 10 . 6/23
You meant "For instance, there were nineteen".
alix33 chapter 9 . 6/23
The mental pic I just got of the dementors tripping over themselves ot get away from Harry's shadow wolf animagus form was funny.
I liked the alliteration in "started siging soothing songs" and "still singing soothing songs".
AW at how the Potter evles swooned when Harry knelt down to talk to Eddie.
AW! Dobby! Welcome, you mad elf!
I love it that the evidence of the fall in standards of the magical education offered at Hogwarts has jst been sent to The Prophet.
alix33 chapter 8 . 6/23
I misread "Vampire Elders" as "Vampire Elves" and thought "they sound like fun".
AW! at Harry getting that animated tattoo of Hedwig on his chest after the finalised the familiar bond.
Vain Hedwig made me laugh.
Burning Day Hedwig ranting at Harry and demanding her beautiful white feathers back made me laugh, as did her muttering about her poor feathers when Fawkes teid and failed to reassure her.
Fawkes calling Hedwig "Her Highness Hedwig" was funny too.
Harry's going to have trouble getting Fawkes and Hedwig back from Cassie, I think.
alix33 chapter 7 . 6/23
You meant "Fleur was a different story compared to the others".
You meant "to not fall under MOB's thumb again".
Yay! for Poppy Pomfrey giving Harry all thos nutrient and healing potions. I wish us readers could have had a link to the chart with the muscle stretches too.
alix33 chapter 6 . 6/23
Cassie would have said "I won't feel safe".
You meant "All four Founders smiled".
Did you mean "both have adequate enough Occlumency"?
You meant "look on Riddle's face".
alix33 chapter 5 . 6/23
Harry "was trying to soothe the crying girl". "Sooth" (which you used originally) is a noun, a synonym for truth. It is used in that sense in the song "Fever" which Elvis Presley did a version of.
alix33 chapter 4 . 6/23
I love the speed at which the gossip travelled the length and breadth of Hogwarts about Snape having wet himself in the world outside Harry's mind when Harry caught him in the Hogwarts Castle trap.
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