Reviews for Trials and Forthcomings
chuck123321 chapter 26 . 5/2
Amazing story! Please continue with it!
chthonian chapter 22 . 5/1
Hi I've really enjoyed reading this series so far and would like to thank you as a group for the effort you've put in. I would like to point out though since you've used it multiple times now that blood is not amber coloured. One other thing I'd like to note is that a few chapters ago you said (roughly) "Hinata briefly considered emerging her entire body in the water", I believe the word you meant was "immerse".
Grasshopper person chapter 26 . 4/30
Y'all are amazing writers. I truly hope you finish this story as it is one of my favorites!
Guest chapter 26 . 4/26
niceeee, finally back on track. plz keep it up
Ander Arias chapter 26 . 4/25
Man, I thought that this story was already dead, given how it's been since the latest update.

So Sasuke has the MS, Naruto is going to train with Killer B, and Hinata is going to get Sage Mode. Neat.

The only thing I didn't like was the encounter with Orochimaru at the end. It felt like it didn't add anything to the chapter.

Anyway, glad to see this isn't dead. Hope the next chapter comes sooner.
NarHina chapter 26 . 4/25
Good surprise and chapter. Sasuke has MS, Hinata is learning sage mode and Naruto Kyuubi control. Power ups already I can't wait to see how the mark will affect her sage training.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
Leaf Ranger chapter 26 . 4/24
Well, lots of stuff happening. Some good, some not so good, and some comedic. Guess we'll see what happens next.
marquis.shax chapter 26 . 4/24
holy shit this story is still alive? I thought it was dead and buried it'd been so long since anybody last bothered to update it
Ssjghostrider chapter 25 . 4/16/2019
First off, godamn. Second, goddamn! This story right here is helping me get back into Naruto. Your guy's take on it is so beautiful. You guys had me so hooked from the first story, and this one isn't disappointing either. I was hoping you guys would give more development on Hinata's curse mark, but I'm happy with it all so far. I never realised how much NaruHina I needed in my life and can't wait to read about them fighting Pain in the future. Hopefully this isn't dead or struggling. I would love to see it continue some more. If need be I would gladly throw my hand in and help out, though even I struggle to keep a constant update on any of my stories, it all comes down to how much time you guys have for it I guess. Regardless, I hope you guys keep it up, and best of luck!
Dragonjek chapter 11 . 1/2/2019
That scene with Sakura and Sasuke came completely out of nowhere. I get the idea of being aroused by combat and stuff, but there wasn't really any build-up-at least of attraction on Sasuke's side. Some earlier on in the story, but recently there hasn't been any particular indications that he liked her that way.
Not to mention "go on a date with me or I'll drug and rape you" is a particularly horrible method of demanding a relationship start up.
Dragonjek chapter 2 . 1/2/2019
Isn't what Sakura's doing sort of treasonous? That poison's going to be used by other Konoha ninja, and it isn't going to do what it's advertised to. She's sabotaging their mission for a few hundred ryo.
Dragonjek chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
That's what they've got the ANBU doing? That's really short-sighted on Konoha's part. If people they owe money to start dying, they're not going to get loans in the future.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/6/2018
really interesting chapter!really liked that sakura's summon is a scorpion as it reflects her skills
Ander Arias chapter 25 . 11/7/2018
While I'm happy to see this story updated, I'm kind of confused. Didn't you guys say that your group broke up and that this fic would be discontinued? Did you make up your minds?

So Sakura gets to summon scorpions? Interesting choice. Not to mention original. I can't wait to see her using her new summons in action.

While it was kind of confusing at first, it's good to see that Gaara survived the extraction process.

Good chapter overall. Can't wait to read the next one.
Leaf Ranger chapter 25 . 11/6/2018
So, we see a party, Gaara dies (Of course he does, heaven forbid anybody outside of myself and one or two others NOT have him die), and it seems Itachi is Konoha. That won't be good.

Keep up the good work.
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