Reviews for Captain Strawhat
EndlessChains chapter 6 . 10/21/2018
A well done story. This was quite interesting with reading how he crew reacted to Luffy actually being a girl as well as how they found out during their time together. I also enjoy how there is no pairing and all their interactions are endearing and adorable. If there is ever more to the story I will be waiting. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Imperatia chapter 4 . 9/28/2017
I agree. I loved how he just crossed M and wrote F.
GwendolynStacy chapter 6 . 7/2/2017
This story is so insanely cute, I freaking love it! It's just so great how nothing /really/ changes, not the important parts at least, except for these little interactions between them! I loved Chopper's and Usopps reactions the most - the thought that Chopper wouldn't even bat an eyelash and Usopp would notice rightaway is just so cute!
Plus, you manage to write it all in such a lighthearted, entertaining way, you /nail/ the characterizations! :D
I know it's been a while, but if you ever find the motivation I'd love to read more of this 'verse! The reactions of Sanji, Robin and the other Strawhats obviously, but maybe also outside the crew? Shanks would be amazing for example, or maybe some of the other supernovas, or hell, even the marines once it gets public knowledge! Alternatively, I think it would be hilarious if Luffy got her first bounty and people started talking about her - except as a boy, so everyone they meet knows their crew, but think she's a boy! Besides, so far everyone's reactions were either super sweet or surprised/shocked, but nothing negative. I'd love to see someone react incredulous (maybe even mocking) when they find out a girl wants to be pirate king - and the crews reactions to it :P I feel like especially Zoro would be /extremely/ protective of his captain, although she obviously doesn't need him to Still, I think it would be adorable!
Thank you so much for writing!
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 6 . 4/13/2017
I love your story! Update soon!
PowerSpirit chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
Thank you. I never liked reading Stories with pairings.
MorbidRobin chapter 6 . 11/26/2016
THANK YOU!
I have been searching for a Fem! Luffy fic that wasn't
a) A Mary Sue
b) In a pairing
Thank you so much very! I loved how you dealt with the reveal of the strawhats and the chemistry between the characters.
What I really loved was that Luffy was IC. Shameless, never embarrassed, oblivious, saving nakama...
Brilliant! Loved it!
Thank you!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 2/6/2016
Also occurred to me what a positive role model Dadan would be for Luffy
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 2/6/2016
Thanks for doing this scene, I was really hopeful.
While very hopeful that you do more, partially hoping you do not do Luffy's family being overprotective. First that is done a lot, but second of all I feel that after fighting bandits so much that Ace would feel that Luffy could handle herself. Up to you of course, and I know it will be good either way :-)
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 2/6/2016
Good insight on Luffy sleeping
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 2/6/2016
LOL on Luffy still being the King, and Nami being Luffy's modesty (and your comment about Gum Gum Balloon)
Good reflections by Franky at the top
Freefan1412 chapter 6 . 12/26/2015
Oh, this fic is so completely and utterly hilarious. Everyone's reactions (or lack thereof) are priceless. What I'm adoring hands down most though is that you're keeping the (damn) pairings out. They can ruin the best of stories. I'm looking forward to more. xd When did Sanji find out? Before or after he kicked her for the first time?
DeborahBee chapter 6 . 11/30/2015
So good! I love this story!
BBLimits chapter 6 . 11/30/2015
I was so happy to see your fics updated! Thank you for writing :)
Blue342 chapter 5 . 10/25/2015
You've done really great job with this, congratulations! Really, characterisation feels spot on from Franky's surprise, to Chopper's professionalism. Also really loved how Nami realized she had missed something but then just tried to figure it out. Usopp too was very plausible, after all he has an eye for detail. Another wonderful bit was how people (mainly Nami and Sanji, though Zoro did his own aloof part too) worked to keep Luffy's modesty as she clearly doesn't care (not here nor in canon).

Another thing I loved here was the lack of pairings. Really, romance is all fine and good if it fits the story but I always feel a bit weird reading fics that have Luffy paired with anyone. His asexuality is just integral part of him. So anyway, I think this is the only fem!Luffy fic I have found that has no shipping, and I find this brilliant. Please, keep it up!

As for future, I'm really looking forward to seeing these revelations with people like Smoker (I'd imagine this would come up somewhere in Alabasta, maybe from Ace) or Gan Fall. Sanji too is probably hilarious. As would be Yosaku and Johnny. Really, I'm looking forward to all future snippets! Damn shame this isn't a real story fic.

Anyway, keep up the good work!
Bobari chapter 5 . 10/15/2015
Thank you so much for the story! I just love the characterization of StrawHats. I was really excited to find out that this fandom has such a canon excuse to write genderbender fics, but mostly no one bothers with exploring the possibilities brought by this change, instead focusing only on romance. So thanks again so much for the fic, it was a breath of fresh air. Hope you haven't abandoned it, good luck!
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