Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Prince of the Whirlpool
Re Lovely Lover chapter 5 . 6/4
Okay so Kushina left him in Konoha never even bothering to check on him once and raised a daughter instead for 10-11 whole years.

I think I'm about done reading. None of this shit makes any sense.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 6/4
Why would they say hes guilty of murdering Naruto and then in 3 months hes back home studying? This is even a story where the civilian council was told to fuck off so how does that make any sense?

(Though again Mebuki who was nice to Naruto is made the evil demon hating head of the council again for some reason.)

Green eyes?
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 6/4
Um... why would Naruto gloss over and ignore being told his mom is alive?

I assume shes in a coma since theres no way in hell she'd let him grow up without her and not even check up on him and take him away for that matter if she did for whatever nonsense reason initially let him stay.

Though even in a coma her brother shouldve nabbed him unless he wants to be castrated by her when she wakes and finds he left him there alone.

Finally why would he say he will teach him everything from their village yet only mention he will be training for a measly 3 months? They have that little to teach?
A10riddick chapter 13 . 5/3
Great chapter!

Without reading the next chapter I think that Masami should do the same to Sasuke, that Naruto to to Sakura.
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 24 . 3/10
This was good. It got a little confusing with the back and forth and the eventual multiple endings but the story was fine. Have to say I’m not a Naruto x Hinata fan. Not because it doesn’t work but because it’s canon and too easy. When you said ‘what where you expectin Ino?’ I actually thought ‘no but I was hoping ‘ lol
Lyrasloon chapter 3 . 11/6/2019
Is Kenshin supposed to remind me of Kenshin Himura, the Hitokiri in Rurouni Kenshin? Cause he kinda does. A bit.
HyperA2019 chapter 8 . 9/20/2019
This is a good story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
The fuck was that crap.
narandaya160 chapter 18 . 8/29/2019
Well I was 12 really lol
robert krause chapter 10 . 6/28/2019
sir i Robert Krause am kind of vs used not on Sakar as Naruto 2 wife and put Naruto under the Clan act for it will be cool and then Naruto had ten-ten too as wife 3 , as for Naruto put his foot down on the fools in his ex vaillge is cool in my book sir,
orein123 chapter 4 . 4/28/2019
Really not sure what to say about this story. Your overall. writing style is... better than most people on this site, but that is more a testament to how little people actually care about good writing than it is to your skill. Your sense of storytelling is absolutely terrible. I made it to chapter four before I just had to stop. The pacing is all over the place. Even for a fanfic, the character interactions are horribly unreasonable, and I'm not basing that analysis off of how the characters acted in the manga or anime. Reactions are stupidly violent for what is going on. This is a bash fic, plain and simple, and you have written the bashing to be more important than the story.
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 2 . 4/12/2019
did you even read manga or watched anime before writing this. because jiraya died in anime and manga both
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
wait wut
robert krause chapter 14 . 3/18/2019
it is good sir as a fan of it was hope Sasuke Uchiha is get his own end by Naruto for when he and his dad and mom was doing to them , L am kind of vs a war with sarkra i hope Naruto will took her as a salve gril /sex pet for him to keep ,when Hinata is wife of him now , sorry if it is a fame up but i was think of star wars jadd the hutt who had his salve gril to be chide to him ,sir
robert krause chapter 7 . 3/9/2019
when Naruto and his wife had living in a old home back on the west side of the whirlpool and be in the 2 home is a men cave offices Naruto and his sister put in for the co the had working no for when it name was be black then most think of , when took out s class bad guys and woman too ,to thifes and others too ,Naruto little sister had her home too in a old navy offices and was full of swords and others daggers axes too ,like her bother too, when Sakura had took over the sound vaillge then rice too , her army too she made up form the sound vaillge to some bad guys she find form others reams elf guys and woman to some tolls men her group try to go west when she took over a big size lands form it warlord and when she doing kill off the fool and siting in power now and on her thro is the heads of her ex lover /and others too she kill off , when in time she get stop by Naruto and co ,when Naruto had put a cell like room into the hills for her and pics on the wall now and the heads too on the wall too , when lock it now Naruto had a fox like head put on it to keep it lock for good too,
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