| Reviews for Natsu Dragneel the Dual Dragon Slayer |
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  No account boy chapter 1 . 7/16 Anyways, so far from the first four chapters I read. From the chapters I read, although not much, it had potential, and I'm ready to see what's next in store. It's moderately okay, although definitely needs polish. And something got me really confused with the first chapter. You have almost to none character development with Jellal and Wendy, so I'm a bit confused with Jellal's reaction when Natsu leaves I do get Wendy's reaction, since she is Wendy, I don't think it's really possible for Jellal to have that kind of reaction. Now enough of me being a bitch and criticizing you, I'd like to continue with the story. |
 Curse Of Kings chapter 1 . 7/11 Does Wendy give out any no holds barred beatdowns in this story? |
| direraven887 chapter 37 . 7/9 What a bullshit, Laxus is still stronger than Natsu, and Natsu won only because Gajeel helped him and because Laxus was disctracted. |
| darknight99 chapter 39 . 7/3 I should have said this on the first chapter but it's obvious that Valinor is inside Natsu just like Igneel. That's all I wanted to say |
| darknight99 chapter 35 . 7/2 Great job |
| darknight99 chapter 9 . 6/30 Great job |
| darknight99 chapter 8 . 6/30 Great story keep it up |
| Dracaris5470 chapter 6 . 6/27 mostly all canon story |
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/25 Soy de Argentina,y la verdad me encantó en con ansias el siguiente capítulo |
| Neroblaze11 chapter 47 . 6/21 okay great chapter I like how natsu is close to zero's level of power. I hope to see how their fight plays out and if jellal will go to natsu or if possible you can probably use this to awaken some of natsu's END powers seeing as he won't be able to stand seeing jellal |
| Quantum qwazi chapter 14 . 6/21 Jesus are you capable of having your harem not slap the main charecter ever conversation they have starts with the mc getting slapped like some pathetic trash Imagine the roles reversed Natsu hitting anyone of the girls because he was to emotional and got worried no that’s leaning towards domestic abuse and it doesn’t change just cause he has balls and a penis The fact you only seem capable of writing this “romance” with domestic abuse to show these half assed caricatures are any thing to one another is telling on the skill put forward in this writing |
| gwb620 chapter 47 . 6/20 Excellent chapter! I’m really looking forward to more! |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 47 . 6/20 Excellent update thank you and coming close to this Arc’s ending |
| Vein Bloodborne chapter 47 . 6/20 Great chapter, can't wait to see how everything concludes. |
| kristinalprime23 chapter 47 . 6/20 oh jeez there goes the neighborhood, when it comes to Natsu-baka it always seems to happen when there is so much already going on. |
