Walter

First up, thanks for making this. Brilliant piece of work for the most part and I really enjoyed it. Your Frieza seemed like a more complicated and imposing villain compared to both the original English and Kai dubbings, but that makes more sense since he learned from his past mistakes and managed to exploit his enemies' strengths and weaknesses against them in diabolical fashion. Sun Tzu -the author of the Art of War- could learn a few things from him.

Someone should contact Akira and recommend him hiring you to work on his projects with him. Anyway, keep up the excellent work, my friend! I look forward to reading your sequel with bated breath.

That's not how the hakai works. You wanted Frieza to have a xanatos gambit ending, but there was a way to do it without the ass pull.

Theres a reason why the transformation of SSGSS is blue. Its not what you think it is.

SSGSS is when Goku and Vegeta add SS to SSG meaning they are boosting the increase of God with the X 50 SS gives them.

What you described in your story is SS with some God Ki influencing it. Which is much weaker then blue.

Now im honestly confused as to why its a blue color too since red and yellow is orange, but im just guessing that its because Toei doesnt want Goku accidently looking like Naruto's final transformation

Wow! Talk about a fast answer! :)

I really loved this story and am very much looking forward to the sequel. :) x2

Allo! Any plans to end this alternative version of this masterpiece story? :)

Very well written!The bad guys needed a Win to keep things only Issue is Goku giving up against is completely contrary to his Being.

I love your portrayal of Freeza, this is how he should be depicted in DB media. Although I hoped he would win his fight with Beerus. Maybe in the last chapter of alternative ending you will let him win? The movie is trash compared to this story. I wanted Freeza's movie to be good, but it wasn't. And it seems modern DB keeps ruining him, he has so much to offer as a character, yet he is a victim of bad writing. Anyway, thank you for writing such a great fic about my favourite character!

I loved the little flashback and how Freeza got his god form. Amazing chapter!

Only Japanese attack name I will say must be used is Kikoho, and that's only because of the TFS reference... So I guess only in comedic scenarios would it be required. I'd give a real review here but figured I'll just give it at the end when I finish this story.

Please do bring Frieza back for the tournament of power.

Yay! This spin on the older story is quite a lot of fun. Makes me even more enthused to see what Freeza does at the end of the Tournament of Power!

After reading the story again I realized it is best not to have Frieza play an active role in this story after all but I would prefer Beerus not get kiiled though.

Please have Frieza play a role in the sequel and please if nothing else do not make Beerus into a villain.

I must admit I enjoyed this fic. It's good to read a story that doesn't follow the " goku gets the crap beat out of him until he gets mad enough to discover a new level of SS " narrative. Hopefully today sequel is in the works