Reviews for Heaven Forbid (You End Up Alone)
guac chapter 14 . 5/6
Damn, I really love this. I absolutely love the fluff-ish theme, and they're all so funny.
laurajustin chapter 14 . 4/14
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
T95Luke chapter 11 . 5/10/2019
So yeah.
I pissed myself from laughing to hard.
Please continue this.
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 14 . 11/7/2018
I'd love to see this continued!
Ken kaneki's shadow wolf chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
I really like this story and I hope that you get the inspiration to write back.
JadeDragon100 chapter 14 . 5/25/2018
At first I was going to leave after I finished reading since it hadn’t updated in so long, but with this funniness, crack and luckily an established hiatus, I’m gonna follow this and wait for the fireworks to explode on this one!
AKA: I’m following this and stalking it.
TheDeadGirlRisen chapter 14 . 4/2/2018
it would be funny if prudence was actually kushina... would make sense as well
Otaku chapter 14 . 9/6/2017
Please continue the story pretty please
BlankCanvas624 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
Um... I thought Sakura's eyes is green?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
kinda reminds me of a superstition in our culture of leaving (a part of?) your spirit behind wherein when leaving a place where there's the feeling that a supernatural event can happen, one would have to call out for his spirit that they were going home so it will go home with them
NatNicole chapter 14 . 12/21/2016
*cackles, calms down enough to snicker & giggle, then resumes cackling*
Every. Single. Word of this story is pure GENIUS! The entire fic is simply AWESOME from start to finish, & I love every character (the semi-S.I. & ghosts in particular)!
Filthy Casul chapter 14 . 10/10/2016
(Cracks knuckles) This fic is great... Now continue it...

Just kidding. I certainly hope you do though. I LOVE this story.
macwag5 chapter 14 . 9/11/2016
Love it. Please start writing again.
Rae Kid chapter 14 . 4/13/2016
Heck no, she ain't no Mary Sue! Geez, pretty much everything's been canon so far except for Haku and Zabuza living up 'til the real Itachi came to town. It's not like she's suddenly got these major awesome techniques that literally can't be beat, really, all her ghosts can do for her is go into Tsukiyomi and be there as moral support, though she COULD use them to keep track of people and spy on them if she was clever about it (though seeings how she's pretty much exactly like an extremely eccentric Naruto who occasionally gives even better, less corny speeches that'd probably have to wait until after the timeskip). Honestly, everything she's done so far is EXACTLY what Naruto did in canon, skill-wise. How the hell is she supposed to be a Mary Sue?

Anyway, if you're looking for inspiration, read In Good Company by Weialala, though be warned- there is slash. Unconsummated pining slash, but I don't expect that to last 'til the end (though it might never actually MAKE IT to the end, the way it's been updating), but slash. Also, Sasuke is really angsty and severely depressed- which makes it a good thing he always has his four ghost buddies to gabber in his ear and refuse to go away! Even Naruto has to stop to eat and sleep and Sasuke can physically beat him or lock him out, but ghosts have all eternity and can go through walls! ...Anyway, yeah, Sasuke is pretty damn pitiful at the start of it and kinda maybe a little slimy but he gets better pretty damn fast and the fic is phenominal! Especially those last two chapters. It has a similar theme to yours so maybe it'll help you get your mojo back, and some ideas?
Nox Deus chapter 2 . 2/25/2016
REALLY funny
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